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bso
bsoLv54yr
2020-07-31 13:37

Its boring as **** . And oh the monologue of the mc it never ends . This king of story telling style wouldn’t make many people happy.so i am dropping it

Along a Fading Path (Naruto)

Leekz01
4.5
34 Chs

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Since I'm not the writer but the guy that is the player (sasuke) of this quest/story, I just wanna say if the GM/Writer happens to read this. I really enjoy the adventure so far "Lost" I have confidence in you writing and world building from your other works and I'm looking forward to what suprises are waiting for me to find.

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