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Beliel
BelielLv24yr
2020-07-05 12:06

I like this story. But I would like to ask you why the naruto genre change. I imagine it would be better if he were still masculine To be frank I don't see how history changes apart from adding naruko as a possible romantic interest or adding hinara as a romantic interest Lack of bromance Sure itachi is the brother and there are moments like that but ... mmm is not the same If naruto is a woman in the story then ashura too? So how did the relationship with indra develop? Indra was a siscon? If naruko is paired with someone would it be sasuke, kiba or hitana? Also who is itachi's romantic interest? Former teammate Shinko Inari , izumi uchiha or shisui uchiha? Sorry for so strange questions Gracias por tan buen historia.

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Beliel
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... And after writing this I just imagined Haruno Sakura taking Naruko's place as a tomboy

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This story was originally a quest dedicated to me from my friend. Basically my friend writes the plot and events while giving me choice to make for my character to interact with the world. As we were agreeing on specifics for this alternate reality, I asked him to make naruto genderswap. We were close to genderswapping others like itachi but I decided I rather keep him as a bro. Basically asura and all her reincarnations were female. Asura and indra were brother and sister in this reality.

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