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Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv44yr
2020-04-06 02:32

i nope out whenever i see a 2nd pov its fucking creepy when it keeps saying things like im him ''you nod. you look at him confused.'' ugh hope it gets changed soon creeeepy

Along a Fading Path (Naruto)

Leekz01
4.5
34 Chs

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Ken_Reader
Ken_ReaderLv4

Maybe it saying that you are that person 🤔🤔🤔🤨🤨🤨

4yr
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Last time I checked, I'm not sasuke uchiha

Ken_Reader:Maybe it saying that you are that person 🤔🤔🤔🤨🤨🤨
4yr
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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Think it’s called malereader stories or some crap like that. Those type of stories are flooded on Wattpad. I don’t know why but I never refer myself as the mc its so weird

4yr
4
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

They usually start off as quests instead of stories. Imagine playing dungeons and dragons and the dungeon master dramatically reads out what your character does and what happens to them. It works when you're actually controlling the character in the story, but it feels weird when reading it in a story.

50ShadesOfAss:Think it’s called malereader stories or some crap like that. Those type of stories are flooded on Wattpad. I don’t know why but I never refer myself as the mc its so weird
4yr
4
Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

I should have listen to your review, didn't realize how bad it really was........

4yr
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Leekz01
Leekz01Author

Since I'm not the writer but the guy that is the player (sasuke) of this quest/story, I just wanna say if the GM/Writer happens to read this. I really enjoy the adventure so far "Lost" I have confidence in you writing and world building from your other works and I'm looking forward to what suprises are waiting for me to find.

4yr

Tartarus
TartarusLv11

Writing quality,the grammar are good. Updating stability are good too. Story development are very interesting. Character are funny and cute. World background are nice. This novel is good. All is good except the 'I' or 'me' got changed to 'You'. I can still read it but it is really bothering me. Especialy even if you try to read it as 'You' and try to immerse to the story but failed it badly. Please change it if you can so the reading can be more enjoy able

4yr
Sin_of_sloth
Sin_of_slothLv5

It's best naruto-fic right now though the reason it has so few power Stones is because there hadn't been update for a month. But overall fricking amazing!

4yr
Kuro_Neko46
Kuro_Neko46Lv4

La historia me encanto, el como sigue la historia y los personajes en ello, me gustaría que siguieras con el proyecto, gracias.

4yr
DabanCrow
DabanCrowLv14

It’s a good Fanfiction. Like really good. I’m very impressed. For hours I sat down and read it to catch up on all the chapters and can say that it is really awesome. Can’t wait for more.

4yr
Rafael_Neves
Rafael_NevesLv4

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4yr
98zach656
98zach656Lv4

I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!

4yr
Beliel
BelielLv2

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Claudeus
ClaudeusLv14

It's good but not for everyone. Sorry I'm out. Good luck author chan

4yr
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