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StanLJPLv154yr
2021-04-24 02:47

Well, if you can get past the initial 80 or so chapters, the novel is a pretty decent read. Were it not for my usual habit of reading 100 chapters before deciding whether or not to proceed, I honestly would’ve long dropped this because of the many contradictory factors/inconsistencies and the amount of frustration felt when reading a novel in which the MC didn’t feel like the protagonist in his very own story. Almost every single thing that was brought up was deemed a mystery in which it seemed like everyone else but the MC was aware of what was going on. Novel didn’t really take a turn until the MC was reborn, as in when he got the wyvern’s heart. From that point on, the novel became a lot more bearable and increasingly interesting. I like the way things are progressing as of now as nothing feels either too fast or slow, well at least in regards to the MC’s leveling up progress. Though I do feel that the plot itself could move at a somewhat slower/steady pace because I feel that too many things have happened and been thrown at us since he was “reborn”. Anyhow, even if things continue as is, I don’t have much to complain about.

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Nickaido
NickaidoAuthor

Thks for the review. I'll try to make more enjoyable. Sorry for the slow start.

Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

what is the approximate number of the harem?

Nickaido:Thks for the review. I'll try to make more enjoyable. Sorry for the slow start.
Nickaido
NickaidoAuthor

6 to 7, depends

Triple_x:what is the approximate number of the harem?
commander_pride_21
commander_pride_21Lv6

I felt the same way as you with mean reading the first chapters but unfortunately I couldn't bear MC beta personality or him nor feeling like MC at all so I dropped around the start of school volume. His personality is too beta and he can't even do a thing right. his weapons hide secrets from him and he doesn't feel like being their master at all. when he tries to ask her about any information or mystery that he wants to know, she tells him he's not read and he's like "Ok, I trust you. thanks". What's more is that some of the female characters that are added to the harem don't feel natural but more like being forcefully added because of the plot. the mysteries keep on piling up without the author never answering and telling "read till the end and you will understand". wells if this continues, you won't have anyone reading at the end. finally, the typical antagonists that are one dimensional and don't have anything interesting to them. they are even borderline "cultivation world young mastersv versions of the world. anyway, this is my opinion about it. it has some good things to it but all the things mentioned above makes it hard to stay and keep reading past 80 chapters.

Daniel_Kalil
Daniel_KalilLv14

if there's a hole, there's a goal bro. the sky is the limit. i already lost count tbh, i only remember Luna and Incursio. and since they didnt even ascend yet (and it wasnt revealed if the next world is the last), at this rate the mc will end up with 20 pokemons

Triple_x:what is the approximate number of the harem?
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Quartermaster
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MadHatter0_o
MadHatter0_oLv3

This is an interesting novel to write anything about. The reason being, it is one of those novels you either love or hate. There is no middle ground for this one. Also, I want to clear this at the beginning that this is merely my impression of the book till chapter 50, NOT A REVIEW OF THE ENTIRE BOOK. Hence, Anything I say is subjected to change due to character development. Furthermore, as I am not a fan of big fan of the harem genre, it might be slightly biased regarding the harem trope. I apologize if that happens and welcome all types of correction and valid arguments(not the type saying if you don't like it, write your own book). I am pretty sure most of the readers came for this story like me, by looking at the synopsis and the promise it holds. A gun-wielding, magicless MC in a sword and sorcery isekai-world who is aiming for the top is an interesting premise. I like the world and its magic system. It's simple and easy to understand. you get everything you can hope for in a fantasy world, from sword to magic, from elf to demon, and everything in between. The magic system and leveling up are pretty straightforward and without any headache-inducing complexity. In short, the premise and the world itself are pretty solid and familiar. I want to divide the characters between MC and other characters because this particular MC needs some explanation. Other than MC, all other characters are familiar, at least if you have been around anime long enough. I am not saying they are poorly written or anything. Contrary to that they are by the book(except one) and as a result, you just don't see any unique characters. This will change in the future if the author decides to do some heavy-duty character development and some interesting backstory is added. The exception to that is Gracier IMO. I still think her attitude doesn't match her age or backstory and hope to see a major character development soon that will make her act her age. Now, I have a serious love-hate relationship with this MC. I love his demeanor and thought process during combat and hate his interaction with female characters. I would like to request everyone, especially people who aren't accustomed to a harem, not to drop it in chapter 1 when he pops up that knight talk. Things get more normal after that and around chapter 9 you can actually see a bit of character development. However, Till chapter 50 he is extremely dependant on his gun spirit regarding decision making which I don't like much. But I am hoping it will soon change as he gains more knowledge about the world and his power. TLDR: Socially MC is a garden-variety harem MC. In combat: He is intelligent, mature, and innovative. Writing style-wise author's first language might not be English. because there are quite a few miss-spelling and wrong word choices. I also noticed there are some discrepancies in certain stats. The good news is the author took notice of it and promised to fix it and hire an editor. So, no point in making an issue out of it. Lastly, give it a try. See how you feel reading it as every person has different tastes. However, if you love a typical harem MC, with familiar character types, this is a perfect read for you.

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