commander_pride_21

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9 years of my life passed here damn!

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commander_pride_21a day ago
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what car? what stairs? what!
"Rachel told me in the car on the way up the stairs. She had about forty-five seconds and she used them efficiently." Monica raised her glass slightly. "Good. I want you where I can keep an eye on you."
Friends: Reborn as a Detective
TV · Soulforger01
commander_pride_21a day ago
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you repeated everything from the previous chapter
Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Story, and the Settling In
Friends: Reborn as a Detective
TV · Soulforger01
commander_pride_21a day ago
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how is it 5 years only? he's 26 and he said they left when he was 17 so it's been 9 years not 5
Ch 6 Chapter 6: Pull
Friends: Reborn as a Detective
TV · Soulforger01
commander_pride_212d ago
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He used wild, dramatic hand gestures when he couldn't find the right English word, mimicking shivering in the freezing cold and complaining about how British food lacked any actual flavor.
Becoming the Best
Celebrities · Dstephen37
commander_pride_212d ago
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The scoreboard glowing high above the stands burned into his retinas, a digital epitaph for a dream that had just violently died: Portugal 1 - 0 Spain.
Becoming the Best
Celebrities · Dstephen37
commander_pride_214d ago
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But the white Merlin ignored him and continued. "Protect innocent children. Protect powerless women. Protect the people who cannot protect themselves." He smiled gently, looking deep into Merlin's eyes. "You once wished someone had protected your mother."
Game Of Thrones: The Queen’s Wizard
TV · Mr_HL
commander_pride_214d ago
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Merlin turned toward the source of the voice. There, stepping out of the darkness, was yet another version of himself. This one wore pure white robes, illuminated by a soft, ethereal light that clung to his body. His face carried a kind smile, almost fatherly in its gentleness.
Game Of Thrones: The Queen’s Wizard
TV · Mr_HL
commander_pride_215d ago
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"Total chaos?" he chuckled.
Grinding EXP From a Demon Hunting Ship
Eastern · Glib Demon
commander_pride_215d ago
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natives vs cyan profound sect vs imortal city forces
'The three powers will intertwine, like three great millstones of flesh and blood... grinding countless cultivators to dust between them...'
Grinding EXP From a Demon Hunting Ship
Eastern · Glib Demon
commander_pride_215d ago
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'The 'Mobile Fleet' was formed to deal with the Beast Tide, so why couldn't it become... a permanent institution?'
Grinding EXP From a Demon Hunting Ship
Eastern · Glib Demon

In Another World With Sun Powers

Who doesn't want to have Escanor powers?!! The power to be the OP character and defeat all your enemies in a cool and badass way. Follow our Hero Aiden as he travels to another world and creates his own legend. Join us on discord: https://discord.gg/pCmYRbK ********************* Author note: This story is a rewrite to the previous one where Eros is the MC. Note that there will be changes especially in the first arc. Thank you and I hope that you follow the story just like the first one. Aiden note: I am now the Holder of the greatest power and you will make sure to follow this story

commander_pride_21 · Fantasy

75 Chs

The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

If you had to chose a power among all the powers of anime what would you choose OF COURSE YOU WOULD CHOOSE ESCANOR SUNSHINE i mean who wouldn't want to be as badass as escanor with his great pride ans awesomeness follow our MC as he uses his powerful grace to rule another world and to prove that he is the strongest man in the world ×××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××× author note : so this is my first novel and i wish for you to criticize me and show where are the faults and i promise to not drop this novel

commander_pride_21 · Fantasy

94 Chs