Very bad story. Pros : 1. Kingdom building novel. 2. Good translation. 3. Based on Mount and Blade which i like. Cons: 1. Way to much wordpadding for make chapters bigger. They repeat the same thing like 5 times in one chapter and 3 times in the next just in case reader forgets it. 2. All the villagers in the territory are male and don't have a single name (atleast up to where I read). They seem to have emotions and talk, but for fks sake they might as well not. No names, no personality, only obeying orders. 3. MC got the memory of a goldfish. He worries about problems when the solution was something he got as a reward from a side quest just one day ago. Or maybe it was because the author made the mc forgot so he could add filler text to the novel. Such as all the way the mc COULD HAVE solved the problem if he DIDN'T HAVE the system. 4. There was one whole chapter which was just an essay about date palm trees. TLDR; Trash novel. Hope it won't get selected.
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Lol i agreed... i read it just bcause its kingdombuild type.other than that it is not really good novel...sry
Translation is good?????What ...Transmigration translated to transporter okie
didnt notice that lol
Repeation gets on my nerve. Maybe it's okay to write about a thing which is not famous in western culture like how camel is best in desert but repeating like 6-8 times actually kills the mood.
Yeah, other massive problem is that he can just spawn citizens/people. It just destroys any immersion in the story. After all outside world doesn't really matter, mc can just plays his system minigame and he dosen't need to worry about resources, people etc. Not even training, everything comes from the system. If this was vr novel, it could work, but as this is set in "real" world it's pretty ridiculous.
I would give it a maximum of 1 star, or even less if possible. (Apologies for any errors in my English, as it is not my native language.) I read up to chapter 640, and it was bad, but I managed to continue due to the kingdom construction aspect. However, starting from chapter 631, it became complete rubbish. A journey that used to take 30 days turned into a day in the desert, hahaha! It felt like the author gave up writing and let their dog take over. The quality deteriorated so much after chapter 631 that I felt like punching my computer. I endured reading 631 chapters of poor quality, and to make matters worse, even a child wouldn't write that badly. Honestly, if I had known this would happen, I would have abandoned it and not wasted my time. Another point is that if you don't enjoy watching gameplay of a game, then don't read it, because the story is essentially a gameplay description spread over numerous chapters. The world-building is terrible, the plot constantly changes, other characters are merely NPCs with whom you can't form a bond, and the protagonist is just someone with many psychological issues. I wouldn't be surprised if, in the end, the protagonist wakes up in a hospital bed in a coma, as the author's creativity in writing feels like being trapped in my nightmares at night. In the end, I only feel sadness and disappointment for the time lost reading this.
He does eventually get female villagers
