Astolfo_My_Waifu

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What? He literally could just hide her ? And also not like the original 30+ something kids from uchiha survived which in the canon version Itachi killed all the kids to keep his brother safe ?? Even tho i don't think it's a "bad" novel , it does alot of things wrong and you just mentioned one of them

The novel doesn't improve , there was a timeskip in anbu arc and for some reason MC gained emotions which isn't explained atall?? all characters are just filler the only real character in this is probably Hiruzen ? I think ... anyway there isn't much change even in 700+ chapters it became a bit boring.If your into perfect MC no weakness this is okayish ..there are many frustrations tho

Read till latest chapter incase something changes in MC character ...Nothing really it's just Training Arcs , Fighting , Training Arcs, Fighting and a bit of talking with hiruzen that's about it ... He also saves like his anbu teammates for some reason 300ish chapter which makes no sense when he literally let's his friend die and try to steal her clan eyes just in case which big spoiler i don't think the author used them in anything?Writing is okay bland if anything , it's interesting just because it's in an already established world (Naruto) ,nothing really pushing the story other than MC wanting to be the strongest ? Build an organization literally just filler at this point?It's not a bad novel but it's bland

But how does Hiruzen know about danzo's sharingan ? The only people who knew in canon were his diehard root supporter (i'm pretty sure he would kill them then anything) and Itachi ???I'm confused

Written by a true middle schooler.And if i'm being honest you thinking people are beating their meat for a 11 year old fictional character , must be a fragment of your imagination which is disturbing to say the least. I feel dumb for even going to the trouble to respond cya bud.

The only chad here is his father for beating him as a child

At the end of the novel he has fucked over 160+ Girls and has 50+ children ... Wish fulfilling story with no real development.Danmachi feels butchered after this.

The author just wanted to get hated with this chapterA 6 month experienced fighter gets done by a seemingly weak mob monster just to awaken an "OP skill" he shouldn't even be given at this point. Throw all logic out of the window and expect it to work , such a bad way of doing it.Will have a bit more patience since i liked the earlier chapters but this was not a 4.8 rating novel chapter ...more like a 2-3 star.

That in itself sounds dumb.