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LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv44yr
2020-05-29 17:18

As the first reviewer it's my responsibility to tell all of you that it is a "SYSTEM" NOVEL!!!!!! *coughs proudly in front of mere mortals who will never get a system in their life* *Bows*

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Lyandy10
Lyandy10Lv12

Mmm, it does say Swadia. And it does seem to be in the right setting.

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Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

If that is so then there should be some exploits too bad the mc isn't a gamer

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Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

If that is so then there should be some exploits too bad the mc isn't a gamer

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Adolf
AdolfLv13

Another original concept, I’m hyped for these new books (sarcastic) but what books made it past the trial read?

Tipi
TipiLv6

http://***.shuquge.com/txt/73923/index.html ha! i not a mere mortal!!

TheEnthraller
TheEnthrallerLv4

Newer concepts of the books are never appreciated and only those same old ****ty type novels are translated I mean not all of them are ****ty but when you read so much of them you don't want them anymore

Adolf:Another original concept, I’m hyped for these new books (sarcastic) but what books made it past the trial read?
Adolf
AdolfLv13

Knowledge is power. When something works people tend to keep doing it that way and follow that trend. When something works really well, people don’t wanna change at all, thus why all novels nowadays are pretty much the same. Like cultivation/reincarnation novels, the reincarnated person is usually a trash young master who suddenly change his ways becoming a genius young master who everyone respects...Another example would be the underestimated mc who hides his power and beats the arrogant young masters up. Also like almost all main characters in every novel has this urge to look in the mirror after being transmigrated to another world and they are outrageously handsome for some odd reason.

TheEnthraller:Newer concepts of the books are never appreciated and only those same old ****ty type novels are translated I mean not all of them are ****ty but when you read so much of them you don't want them anymore
LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4

Bro the novels I have read mainly have average face mc . Don't know, mabye author's pettiness to never give us a handsome mc.

Adolf:Knowledge is power. When something works people tend to keep doing it that way and follow that trend. When something works really well, people don’t wanna change at all, thus why all novels nowadays are pretty much the same. Like cultivation/reincarnation novels, the reincarnated person is usually a trash young master who suddenly change his ways becoming a genius young master who everyone respects...Another example would be the underestimated mc who hides his power and beats the arrogant young masters up. Also like almost all main characters in every novel has this urge to look in the mirror after being transmigrated to another world and they are outrageously handsome for some odd reason.
LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4

Bro the novels I have read mainly have average face mc . Don't know, mabye author's pettiness to never give us a handsome mc.

Adolf:Knowledge is power. When something works people tend to keep doing it that way and follow that trend. When something works really well, people don’t wanna change at all, thus why all novels nowadays are pretty much the same. Like cultivation/reincarnation novels, the reincarnated person is usually a trash young master who suddenly change his ways becoming a genius young master who everyone respects...Another example would be the underestimated mc who hides his power and beats the arrogant young masters up. Also like almost all main characters in every novel has this urge to look in the mirror after being transmigrated to another world and they are outrageously handsome for some odd reason.
Adolf
AdolfLv13

What novels you be reading?? They probably have average faces until they start cultivating.

LORD_OF_ORIGIN:Bro the novels I have read mainly have average face mc . Don't know, mabye author's pettiness to never give us a handsome mc.
No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15

You're awesome 👍👍

Tipi:http://***.shuquge.com/txt/73923/index.html ha! i not a mere mortal!!
Muspon
MusponLv13

&*

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LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4

No after cultivation they just become 'elegant'. 1 Am I a god? 2 carefree path of dreams 3 mini world of endless games 4 omniscient reader 5 Shadow something And many more,

Adolf:What novels you be reading?? They probably have average faces until they start cultivating.
Adolf
AdolfLv13

Imma read am I a god? I haven’t got around to that one now that I think abt it.... thank you for the recommendation fam.

LORD_OF_ORIGIN:No after cultivation they just become 'elegant'. 1 Am I a god? 2 carefree path of dreams 3 mini world of endless games 4 omniscient reader 5 Shadow something And many more,
Castiel0123
Castiel0123Lv13

Thanks! How did you find it??

Tipi:http://***.shuquge.com/txt/73923/index.html ha! i not a mere mortal!!
invisible_768
invisible_768Lv11

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Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

He's right most novels have an average looking MC

Adolf:What novels you be reading?? They probably have average faces until they start cultivating.
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Yes, most of them

LORD_OF_ORIGIN:Bro the novels I have read mainly have average face mc . Don't know, mabye author's pettiness to never give us a handsome mc.
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Yes, most of them

LORD_OF_ORIGIN:Bro the novels I have read mainly have average face mc . Don't know, mabye author's pettiness to never give us a handsome mc.
Adolf
AdolfLv13

Most novels transmigration novels always talk about how handsome the mc is, rarely would a mc have average looks, and that’s mainly when they are non human

Ancient_:He's right most novels have an average looking MC
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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

It's an alright novel, good idea but doesn't really stack up. My main problems come during chap 29 - 30. The "village" if you can call it that has the counsel house, bandit hideout, and 5 houses. If you read ANY kingdom-building novel then you understand at the start everyone pulls there weight to help build the foundation. However, the Author ignores all this and is already trying to build the currency. This is by far the stupidest thing I've seen and has annoyed tf outta me. It's not even the worst part, he pays the military and bandits but then ignores the normal workers, the farmers etc how does this make sense? Also, he then gives out all the food etc for free without putting a price on them. Doing this, why tf is he paying his people than when there is nothing to buy? You're literally just giving money away to someone who it will hold no value to. Instead of investing it to build up the foundations more and giving them better-living conditions. Adding onto this he is not treating everyone equally by just paying the military witch will then lead to outrage. He then wonders how he is so fcking broke. Another thing that is stupid is that the only way he can gain more of the money easily is to trade mystical items to the system which is explained as cornerstones of kingdoms, clans, empires.... No need for me to explain how stupid this is. Finally, the last straw for me is when he traded his food supply for a tiny bit of money that he shouldn't have even lost in the first place. For a village that was wondering how they will survive for more than 13 days to then trade their food supply for money (which the villagers have), it just doesn't make sense to me... food is essential for tiny villages. Adding onto this further any situation the mc finds himself in even if he himself from his own stupidity got him there is magically worked out by the system. Other than these things it was a great novel with an interesting idea. I loved the idea of a magical kingdom in the desert hidden from all. Plus it was interesting what lay further in the desert and the enemies witch lay near. Just couldn't stand the stupidity that I mentioned before.

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