I admit, I was pretty doubful at first. But after having read all the chapters (15 at this point of time) I truly see some potential in this story. A lot of people have given you ****, most people didn't like the fact that the protagonist joined the Soma Familia. I bet a lot of people were thinking stuff along the lines of 'why didn't he join a stronger familia, like Loki's or Hephaestus' smithing empire of a familia'. Well it's quite simple, suply and demand. William had nothing to put on the table, he had no value, nothing to contribute, and certainly didn't look experienced to the trained eye. Yes, he was acting mature because of his transmigration status, but no one, and I mean no one (except for saints), want to waste precious resources on a nobody with seemingly no apparent unique characteristics, that is just economic suicide. And I've just argued from an economic perspective, how do you think most of the gods would react in general to someone like William? They would be bored, uninterested, and dispassionate about someone like him. Most gods have decended to have fun and enjoy teasing and playing with mortals, they wouldn't even bat an eye when seeing someone like William, but that may change now. William has gotten some actual character development, and even unlocked some unique skills, so he will definitely become more involved with some of the more influential gods, so don't get your panties in a twist. I've enjoyed this read so far, and I'm looking forward to more chapters, author-san.

I got to chapter three got to the end, and said peace I'm out! The MC did something really dumb that I couldn't abide by. He pretty much made himself a slave because of impatience author totally tanked the story at that point I recommend that you don't read this unless you like dumb, perverted and impatient MC's.

The story is great. The person is smart but sometimes he does thing that make little sense like joining the soma familia. The character development is much better than other danmachi fanfics. All in all get past the silly moments that usually will be explained later or are needed for the story to develop you got yourself a nice fanfic to read while in bed. :)

complete garbage mc is beyond stupid he is more mentally challenged the most stupidest cartoon character i can think don't waste your time with this book the mc doesn't even think about his actions no logic or reason put it down don't pick this abomination of a "story" up

Let summarize It.. If you are into a horrobly executed plotline full of incoherently forced scenarios and extreme edgelord meant for perverted and immature readers, then you're welcome to waste a time of your lifeline on this. Ai... It felt like I was dumped straight to hell from heaven reading this right after going through two deserving highly rated new ffs. Totally ruined my day...

Honestly i got hooked after reading chapter 11 . First 1-10 chapter is really hard to read . well its all good after that. When i read first few chapter i was like what the f**k why this damn mc is so stupid.He is already 16-17 year old in his previous life but he acting like a kid who don't know about the harshness of world. Well i still read after reading author's comment . Now in the line hoooo badass mc . I really hope author will add some romance.

Got to say that the beginning was rough, but now at chp 19 the MC used his shaky beginning as character growth. The author actually listens to his readers and improved his writing. If you're able to get past the first 10 chps, then you'll start seeing the hidden gem this fic is. It makes me glad that I stood with it until now. I guess the only negative would be some of the MC's reasoning for doing dump crap. There are better excuses, but I think the author has been fixing them. Other than that I think the pauses between paragraphs is unnecessary, I hope that will be removed or changed to /-/.

The story picked up a bit slow with the first 10 chapters but I understand that the 10 chapters were necessary to get a better understanding of what led to MC's change. But after the first 10 chapters MC became badass and more smart. I know in the first 10 chapters his actions may make it seem like he is stupid but not everyone is perfect and i took it as the decisions he took then was a result of his situations at that point. So just give the fanfic a chance and read it, afterall it is a fanfiction we are not looking for a masterpiece so it has its cons but I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to more chapters. Keep up author, nice job 👍

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