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LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv44yr
2020-04-03 06:21

Let summarize It.. If you are into a horrobly executed plotline full of incoherently forced scenarios and extreme edgelord meant for perverted and immature readers, then you're welcome to waste a time of your lifeline on this. Ai... It felt like I was dumped straight to hell from heaven reading this right after going through two deserving highly rated new ffs. Totally ruined my day...

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nkcthereaper
nkcthereaperAuthor

I honestly don't understand what you and some of the other reviews meant by perverted as I haven't even written anything remotely close to perverted yet. Well if you don't like a dark and tragic MC then I will admit that it isn't for you. But atleast don't lie about things which aren't even there😑

LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv4

I did say for particular readers but to answer your confusion, perversion in my sentence has many different ways to describe it Eg: Sadist, Masochist, ect. (anything you can consider gross and the like) (something which is generally understood is particular sites, mostly on other asian novel sites which majority doesnt go to due to being unable to read) As for dark fantasy, sure barely passable but still not good. (Though, I will applaud your for atleast trying as long time readers and critiques know that writing a dark fantasy is extremely difficult We can start a "how a good dark fantasy should be" debate which may not end and eventually lead to ww3 *shrug*) In the end of the day, the issue is still the execution of your plot/scenario. Unrefined should be the right word, tho others might think of a better one. Still, up to you whether you understood and improve on it or ignore it with another excuse and crutinize other's opinion just to shrug it off. Nothing new really.

nkcthereaper:I honestly don't understand what you and some of the other reviews meant by perverted as I haven't even written anything remotely close to perverted yet. Well if you don't like a dark and tragic MC then I will admit that it isn't for you. But atleast don't lie about things which aren't even there😑
Mandiiyy
MandiiyyLv13

Yeah where is there a perverted scene i am actually searching for it , but all i found is impotent MC.🤨🤨

nkcthereaper:I honestly don't understand what you and some of the other reviews meant by perverted as I haven't even written anything remotely close to perverted yet. Well if you don't like a dark and tragic MC then I will admit that it isn't for you. But atleast don't lie about things which aren't even there😑
Giorgi_Kakaladze
Giorgi_KakaladzeLv2

задержка на следуши том будет такимже?

nkcthereaper:I honestly don't understand what you and some of the other reviews meant by perverted as I haven't even written anything remotely close to perverted yet. Well if you don't like a dark and tragic MC then I will admit that it isn't for you. But atleast don't lie about things which aren't even there😑
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Woswa1d
Woswa1dLv3

I admit, I was pretty doubful at first. But after having read all the chapters (15 at this point of time) I truly see some potential in this story. A lot of people have given you ****, most people didn't like the fact that the protagonist joined the Soma Familia. I bet a lot of people were thinking stuff along the lines of 'why didn't he join a stronger familia, like Loki's or Hephaestus' smithing empire of a familia'. Well it's quite simple, suply and demand. William had nothing to put on the table, he had no value, nothing to contribute, and certainly didn't look experienced to the trained eye. Yes, he was acting mature because of his transmigration status, but no one, and I mean no one (except for saints), want to waste precious resources on a nobody with seemingly no apparent unique characteristics, that is just economic suicide. And I've just argued from an economic perspective, how do you think most of the gods would react in general to someone like William? They would be bored, uninterested, and dispassionate about someone like him. Most gods have decended to have fun and enjoy teasing and playing with mortals, they wouldn't even bat an eye when seeing someone like William, but that may change now. William has gotten some actual character development, and even unlocked some unique skills, so he will definitely become more involved with some of the more influential gods, so don't get your panties in a twist. I've enjoyed this read so far, and I'm looking forward to more chapters, author-san.

Hentai_Senchou
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