This fanfic has a great premise, but it starts to get repetitive after a certain point. The mc has no drive to do anything and it seems like this is just a story of stealing maids and conquering them(sex). There is a lot of potential for the story so I'd like to see something different. For me the thing that made this story stand out was the possible taming of monsters and evolving them beyond imaginable heights. I'd love if the mc got interested in the possibilities that a weak no name monster could reach and then set out to make something crazy happen. It would be like a mature version of pokemon similar to Long Live Summons. I'm looking forward to what comes out next.
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LIKEIf you're interested in the bakugan, someone wrote a fanfic about the bakugan and it made me feel very nostalgic. The fanfic is called "bakugan: rise of the half bakugan", if you have time, I would appreciate it if you could take a look and write your personal opinions in the comments. they are called authors, but their articles do not stand out because there is not much interaction. I'm a writer too, so I'm posting some fanfictions with comments so you can feel better. I am writing this message because I am afraid that if he feels that what he has written is not taken into account, he will leave. If you enjoy this fanfic like me, you will make me very happy if you direct others to this fanfic. Thanks if you've read this far. (and my english is not very good so sorry for the typos.)