Hello guys author here, please comment your views good or bad please do so. Any idea or suggestions, you are more than welcome. I will try to be regular and iam not planning to drop it anytime soon. So please support me.
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I left some ideas in my review I think it just needs some more details and inner dialogues or dialogues between characters to improve. Maybe even some world building by adding college scouts or pro scouts and teams/players that weren’t in the anime To add some more interactions so that if one day you finish through high school part you can keep going how you want. Maybe even add a love interest and slow it down a little once you get to the Jango tournament and take it one pitch at a time when he’s playing or batting. Also maybe add a secondary position since he’s a good batter So that he can play even when not pitching or pinch hit. But so far I like how it’s all set up and the premise of his system, maybe explain what he all did with his money though and how much he has left and if he moved or sold his old house to buy one closer to seidou for vacations and stuff. Ps: is he emancipated since he’s an orphan?
Love the work man/woman. Loving it so far
Goooooodddd
One outs mc’s wit and personality while being more skilled.
do some romance please
Add other baseball animes into it like Touch, Major, or Crossgame.
Man you dropped .....WHYYYYY Please try to write again this story it is a fun read
at least complete your story .aaaaaaaahhhhhhh it's so frustrating
