I like we’re it’s going but it could use some more details like what did he do with all the money he got? did he sell his house and move closer to seidou? More interactions between characters and in depth world/character building. Who’s his roommates? What type of training does he do? Etc. I get that it’s an anime so people should be able to fill in the blanks but maybe some more dialogue between characters or Add what some characters inner thoughts and what there thinking might help to add some more flavor like what does everyone think about the mc? Also will there be a love interest? There is that one team manager in the anime that’s the same year as sawamura. Overall I like how it’s all set up though and how his system and skills work just needs a little more detail and it’d be 5 stars all around
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Thanks for your suggestions and comment I will definitely use these
