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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv54yr
2020-06-27 00:18

I know The Synopsis is messed up, Here you go. Short: Seems like the mix of 48 Hours a day and The devils cage. Mc is a martial artist, He uses his head, and doesn’t cower. Very realistic. But he has Leukemia. Basically a story about a sick Mc getting a chance to be cured by participating in something. He doesn’t know what is going on. He gets thrown in a world (1986 HongKong) to complete mission and gain points to use the cure. They are called “Yanfu Walkers”. The world seems really interesting, The “Gods/High level entities” are monsters or myths from ancient china (Vermilion bird etc.). So far it seems like there will be a lot of things happening in the real world too and not just the “Game”. Basically other than the Translator translating exact words, And a little confusion during dialogues, This novel is great. Long: World: It is believed there there is a Yanfu tree, And our world in one of the fruits. Our world AKA our timeline. Each fruit has a different timeline/World. Like how the parallel world theory works. And The people who can travel between this worlds are Yanfu Walkers, Like our MC, Who go to different worlds to do missions and earn point and level up. From the looks of it, This world will have historical Events with a touch of magicalism, Nothing Scifi yet as the tag suggests. I will not go into detail of each world. Too much 🤷🏻‍♂️ MC: MC is a martial artist. He is usually Calm, Makes use of everything doesn’t have that take pride, Doesn’t cower. And quite realistic about his situation too, Is ruthless when needed, And kind otherwise. He doesn’t have that fake righteousness. (MC kills someone in a fight, And doesn’t justify it, and knows that it’s either him or them.) So far I like his choices, He does make some mistakes, But nothing big. The best thing about him is he uses everything, Lies, Cheats, Kills, and even bows down a little. Unlike those stupid MC who act straight as hell, and the plot armour saves them because “The didn’t bend”. 🙄 Side Characters: Great side characters, During the first world, The side characters have a lot of power, Not like the usual where MC solves everything even if he is against a god. They also have good back stories. And learning how they are in an actual world they might meet the MC again. It’s a good novel, You should at least read 46 chapters to get everything cleared up, That’s where MC learns about stuff. The terms might be a little weird because sometimes the translators puts direct translation. The game system structure is also a little confusing but nothing that might make you want to just drop the novel.

Beginning with the Ubume Bird

Huo'er Gai
4.2
664 Chs

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thewayofKABOOMMMMM
thewayofKABOOMMMMMLv14

Thanks man, if I end up liking the novel , it would be because of your review

4yr
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ultimate_boredom
ultimate_boredomLv10

Respect+1 for the insightful review

4yr
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ibrahem
ibrahemLv6

Thanks man great review

4yr
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Luca_DiSalvo
Luca_DiSalvoLv2

I like it.

4yr
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YesterdayNoMore
YesterdayNoMoreLv3

We need more of these kinds of reviews in the comment section . Thanks man and have a nice day ♥ .

4yr
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MagicSand
MagicSandLv6

I give you a "Like" because of respect for the review

4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

Hahaha Great, So did you like it? 😜

thewayofKABOOMMMMM:Thanks man, if I end up liking the novel , it would be because of your review
4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

Thanks 😉

ultimate_boredom:Respect+1 for the insightful review
4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

You are most welcome 😄

ibrahem:Thanks man great review
4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

Haha Yes, I didn’t want people to dislike the novel without even trying so, 🤷🏻‍♂️😂 You have a nice day too.

YesterdayNoMore:We need more of these kinds of reviews in the comment section . Thanks man and have a nice day ♥ .
4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

Hahahha Thanks 😄

MagicSand:I give you a "Like" because of respect for the review
4yr
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0Unknown_Origins0
0Unknown_Origins0Lv4

I would have ignored it if i didn't read this review thanks..

4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

I know right? 😅 Both authors and translators need to work on this.

0Unknown_Origins0:I would have ignored it if i didn't read this review thanks..
4yr
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0Unknown_Origins0
0Unknown_Origins0Lv4

Yup definitely need to.

Shadowdracul:I know right? 😅 Both authors and translators need to work on this.
4yr
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armagedon
armagedonLv5

hey, does he have a special cheat or something like that?

4yr
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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

I guess not? He doesn’t have a cheat, But he did do great in the first episode, So his rewards were kond of what others get in 2-3 runs. So just a good head start, No cheats.

armagedon:hey, does he have a special cheat or something like that?
4yr
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Eddicted
EddictedLv5

A very nice and detailed review bro. those idiots should replace that useless synopsis with your review. Keep up the good work brother.

4yr
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MochiFeelings
MochiFeelingsLv14

Yep. The synopsis made me believe the MC is a female instead of male. But this comment said otherwise. All in all, we need more good reviews like this one to shine some light on those dark synopsis. Thank you.

Eddicted:A very nice and detailed review bro. those idiots should replace that useless synopsis with your review. Keep up the good work brother.
4yr
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Azure_raven125
Azure_raven125Lv5

I know I’m late to the party but the review is amazing you break it down real nice and simple you got examples and all that like thanks bro you need to put some more reviews out there they be looking too nice 👀👀

4yr
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ImmortalSaintess
ImmortalSaintessLv12

I love people who come here and write and actual review about the novel like what’s it is about and sometimes their personal opinions of the book it really helps others who are thinking of giving it a try. Thanks for a great review

4yr
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KeyLessHeart
KeyLessHeartLv11

The novel is ok. the translation is a bit problematic as I beleive that the translator just translator tried to translate everything word for word. which caused some words be akward. The story development is also ok but I wouldnot say it best as everything was explained in casual fashion during conversations may be thats for the best. After reading 39 chapters, I still cannot get the total view of mc's character. The mc's character impression is not bold and noticeable as the story wants.

4yr

troutrun
troutrunLv5

This story seems to indicate that the MC will get to travel to different worlds or time periods to perform certain tasks. After getting an opportunity to potentially solve the MC's illness, the MC is transported back to 1986 Hong Kong where a game-like element is introduced along with a set of tasks. To achieve the task, the MC appears to be willing to do whatever is necessary, even following underneath a boss, clinging to a wealthy sponsor (woman) and underground fighting. The story seems to focus heavily on martial arts, going deep into some historical martial art context.

4yr
Brezer
BrezerLv14

Why the hell can they not put in a synopsis for the stories instead of this useless crap. More and more are getting like this.

4yr
EsliEsma
EsliEsmaLv14

How should I put it starts stereotypical, but within that first chapter every thing changes. Our MC has cancer and suddenly a demon pops up to make a deal. The plot is fast paced with plenty of action, but the dialogue and transition are weird. I don't know if that is the fault of the translator or the Author

4yr
JosephMcknight
JosephMcknightLv5

LORD OF ENIGMA AND UBUME BIRD WAS NOT PICKED! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU!

4yr
kane
kaneLv3

It’s ok I wished it could have been better. If the translator didn’t try to translate word for word the whole story would have been smoother and way easier to understand.

4yr
Filler1_Name2
Filler1_Name2Lv15

I just really don't find this story to be gripping in any way and it feels too shallow and like story that has already been told thousands of times. I don't know why I keep getting this recommended to me, but I'm really not personally interested in it.

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Azroth5
Azroth5Lv4

Does anyone know its chinese name? Or a site where you can read it mtl? I can’t find it so I would really appreciate it if you could help Thanks

3yr
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