armagedon

which is it?

I hope you're better

I've reached chapter 40, so far it's been meaningless that he returned from the future, he doesn't show any combat skills, his character doesn't look like that of someone who spent 9 years slaving himself inside a game, and everything he's got so far can only be explained by luck, a stupid amount of it. He also seems to forget about his situation at a moments notice, his goal was supposed to be helping his family, but he goes and wastes away his money on prostitutes, I can't help but dislike the character. there's no character development, everything's rushed, there's a bit of world building, but its mostly limited to the history of an ancient race. The grammar is acceptable, at least it's got that, but other than that, it's more mediocre jack of someone accomplishing things with no effort, no growth and no worth.

isn't this more like a villain story? the mc is promiscuous, doesn't seem to hold any qualms about drug abuse, and now he'll destroy a guild, granted, it's an evil one, but he's not doing it for that reason, and I doubt there'll be any character development

it seems our dear author is making his best to turn this into an idiotic character, with no common sense

so there was an army of 200 million humans? tf

yeah, when you are in urgent need of money, so you decide to waste away what you have in a luxury car, that's some solid reasoning

this sucks

tone it down a bit, he was probly joking, besides, this was it really necessary for the author to write an accident just when he passes by?

i know you wrote this a year ago, but I gotta say that i completely agree with you, at that time i used read this novel every day, i was up to day with all the chapters, but I ended up dropping it around the same time as you, tho i couldn't really explain why i was getting bored about it, and you explain it so well, it just loses its excitement, at least for me.