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really nice start expect the whole filling thing what killed this story for me was chapter-58-first-kill like it came out of a blue he is not a calculated killer nor was he tormented to have the idea of killing a school mate that fast without reason and the stupidity of killing someone in an advance society and not even knowing his background feel forced to create a cold blooded hero without context

always with lazy writing make him an orphan to avoid the family's connection and back story

make it return damage or anyother good name

why not social just social so people can understand

nice change of pace

this novel is very bad not noraml bad there is i cant write bad and then i cant read bad this novel is so much worse there are no reason or any logical explianation for how bad this novel the guy is stupid way overpower that he already broke the whole power balance no logic he goes on a killing spree and start killing the whole city and get angry that the people is trying to kill him i stopped after this chapter i felt every brain cell scream as they die while i read the last chapter

i like this story it's a little different than the norm here but the mc is as stupid as can be every thing he get is spoon feed bu the system he find a salt mine sell it to the baron for 50 silver which in turn sell it for 300 sliver and he know he will betray him and the baron is desperate for silver he vould have said like 100 silver or more but no lets give my enemy more mone to build army so he can be a headache when fighting him another thing the enemy is attacking him a guy from earth dosent cross his mind to keep watch on the enemy when he know the road or harass them no lets all burn the palm tree so the system can grow them back

great novel i highly recommend it five stair five stair five stair five stair five stair five stairfive stair five stairfive stairfive stairfive stairfive stairfive stairfive stairfive stairfive stair

love this game

also he is 12 year he at the most have a crush not perving on a little girl take the good from the wuxia novel not the troop of cliche trash