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ShifuLong
ShifuLongLv31yr
2023-03-02 03:59

Bueno, que puedo decir, vine motivado por las reseñas y la cantidad de estrellas que le pusieron a la novela; esperanzado con que fuera una novela superior a la media pero lamentablemente termino siendo mediocre en el mejor de los casos. Quede por el capitulo 250-260 aprox. Esto es una simple critica mía ,así que espero que solo la tomen como referencia, lean la novela y determinen si les gusto o no. Por cierto para los que les gusta el harem grande, esta es su novela.

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GenoXX
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ShifuLong
ShifuLongLv3

Por cierto; aguante chifuyu ,la mejor waifu, nada mas que agregar.

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Ruxc
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Great novel but if you could just google ranslate nd with the help of garamerly post another one in english, you will get even more likes. Hope you do this as it is a great work

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Lobsang99
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Fuck yuri you screwed up the story and typical mc beta who lets his wife slap him, he has no voice, diske is to blame for sleeping with yuriko with a promosa of plot armor that you gave him pff, he does not care that his women cheat on him with another fack fackkkk -_- they love the mc a lot and they go around touching each other pff and rika I do not forgive him I wish I had not read this shit

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Daoist21616161
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Reveal spoiler

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Propendol
PropendolLv2

another piece of shit with positive ratings from the bots. with huge holes in the narrative. emotionless characters made of cardboard. as well as a delusional mission to find out the beginning of everything(or whatever the wording was), which is performed by traveling through fictional worlds? it even sounds crazy.

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Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Lo has mejorado bastante. Se siente muy ... como se dice, suave? Al leerlo. Sólo no olvides de escribir los gestos que hace la doctora o la forma de hablar que tiene junto con sus movimientos y lo meloso que es. Algo como: Shizuka se acerco y se apoyo en mi espalda, con un dedo haciendo círculos en mi mejillas "ne, ne Cloud-kun, Cloud-kun" Pero tu escribe lo mejor que yo jajajaj

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TFH
TFHLv6

Author, te estan robando tu novela aca en WN. Usuario Xuefang1 ha usado tu novela para traducirla al ingles, cambiar unas cuantas cosas y hacerla pasar por suya. La novela se llama SOURCE : A MULTIVERSE TRAVEL. Incluso pide apoyo a Pâtrêôn para que pueda seguir creando contenido porque crear la historia es "Dificil"

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Dark19
Dark19Lv11

5 estrellas es lo mínimo que puedo dar por un trabajo que parece una obra maestra.No se si tanto así pero a mi me encanta,gracias y continúa con el bien trabajo.

4yr
KingZerck
KingZerckLv5

Sigue con todo tu duro esfuerzo que nosotros (tus fans) te apoyamos👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Oniichanishere
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Dark19
Dark19Lv11

Mejoró mucho de la novela anterior.Gracias y continúa. ¿Alguien sería tan amable de recomendarme una novela similar?😅😅😆😆😆🙏🙏👍👍 Ya sea en español o de HOTD. Me encanta y creo que está novela y las otras que escribió el autor son maravillosas y fácilmente se han convertido en unas de mis primeras novelas favoritas.

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