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Lobsang99
Lobsang99Lv23yr
2021-02-06 09:30

Fuck yuri you screwed up the story and typical mc beta who lets his wife slap him, he has no voice, diske is to blame for sleeping with yuriko with a promosa of plot armor that you gave him pff, he does not care that his women cheat on him with another fack fackkkk -_- they love the mc a lot and they go around touching each other pff and rika I do not forgive him I wish I had not read this shit

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GenoXX
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dude the hell with you, I did't write yuri, she is only dependent on Shizuka, they don't have ***, they have not kissed either. If you stop reading only for this, then sorry. Shzuka only cares about her friend, that's why she acts so passively.

Lobsang99
Lobsang99Lv2

If 2 drunk women in the same bed did not touch each other, one of them is in love with the other because magical sanity said no to Rika and she understood him (Magical sanity: Rika-chan does not **** Shizuka because she has a boyfriend) and you say that nothing happened because you are the author just because you could well change it if it had happened and blame alcohol as a typical excuse for harem, be passive hahaha and that is why you doubt so much when she tells him that she is in love with She pff if she had another friend she would also doubt the same much she loves Mc I bet your excuse is that she begs the MC to accept her in the harem and pum open relationship Shizuka will be with the 2 because the MC will say if I will convince her with me dick for my girl and when not this they will console each other. And the other girls again you see the typical alcohol excuse because you couldn't do another development and the mc beta "if it's a dream so I'll ****" I wouldn't have been bothered if you had given another development to change Rika's way of thinking and accept the girls you went the easy way I guess but hey I had liked the story so far goodbye google traductor :)

GenoXX:dude the hell with you, I did't write yuri, she is only dependent on Shizuka, they don't have ***, they have not kissed either. If you stop reading only for this, then sorry. Shzuka only cares about her friend, that's why she acts so passively.
Onigami
OnigamiLv5

y Auto-sama así que si va a la arifureta sin Yue para nosotros?. ¿Podrías escuchar este spoiler sobre harén porque soy tan fan de yue por favor? incluso si lo toma y cambia algo para que pueda crecer, ya es bueno, como podría suceder con shirone en DXD si se va a casa

GenoXX:dude the hell with you, I did't write yuri, she is only dependent on Shizuka, they don't have ***, they have not kissed either. If you stop reading only for this, then sorry. Shzuka only cares about her friend, that's why she acts so passively.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

True this disgusting yuri

Lobsang99:If 2 drunk women in the same bed did not touch each other, one of them is in love with the other because magical sanity said no to Rika and she understood him (Magical sanity: Rika-chan does not **** Shizuka because she has a boyfriend) and you say that nothing happened because you are the author just because you could well change it if it had happened and blame alcohol as a typical excuse for harem, be passive hahaha and that is why you doubt so much when she tells him that she is in love with She pff if she had another friend she would also doubt the same much she loves Mc I bet your excuse is that she begs the MC to accept her in the harem and pum open relationship Shizuka will be with the 2 because the MC will say if I will convince her with me dick for my girl and when not this they will console each other. And the other girls again you see the typical alcohol excuse because you couldn't do another development and the mc beta "if it's a dream so I'll ****" I wouldn't have been bothered if you had given another development to change Rika's way of thinking and accept the girls you went the easy way I guess but hey I had liked the story so far goodbye google traductor :)
Azure_Fox_6699
Azure_Fox_6699Lv1

i should smack u!!

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