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Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv44yr
2020-08-20 03:10

Empecemos con lo positivo: - Novela en Español (Los que hablan ingles "¡Es su turno de usar el traductor!") - Protagonista Despiadado - Harem Útil (Algunas) - Desarrollo del Harem (Algunas) - Historia Entretenida (Para pasar el rato) - Actualizaciones Constante. Puntos negativos: - Protagonista reactivo (Tienes sus momentos de actividad pero son en menor cantidad) - Sistema (Mi punto más subjetivo. El sistema da misiones y en ocasiones son "estúpidas". Como la misión de darle una novia a Ichika ¿Que me importa si el tiene novia?) - Personajes secundarios (Ok, este también es medio subjetivo. Komuro e Ichika son irrelevantes y no aportaron nada que siento que leer sobre ellos en el fic fue relleno del malo. También el otro del nuevo mundo que no me acuerdo como se llama) - Sigue mucho al canon (El protagonista "rejuvenece" para siempre tener la edad de los protagonistas originales y los cambios se mantienen al mínimo, su presencia no cambia casi nada a pesar de estar mucho tiempo en lugar) - Drama estúpido (Lo llamo así por que no tiene mucho sentido para mi Cloud elige linea de sangre de dragón y SORPRESA eso le trae muchísimos inconvenientes. Muy seguro que le va a dar también la enfermedad de mareo de los Dragon Slayer en un futuro) Termino aquí por que si no parecerá que odio el fic (Cuando no es así). Honestamente quisiera darle menos puntuación para equilibrar las clasificaciones pero no lo haré.

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Ruxc
RuxcLv4

Great novel but if you could just google ranslate nd with the help of garamerly post another one in english, you will get even more likes. Hope you do this as it is a great work

4yr

Lobsang99
Lobsang99Lv2

Fuck yuri you screwed up the story and typical mc beta who lets his wife slap him, he has no voice, diske is to blame for sleeping with yuriko with a promosa of plot armor that you gave him pff, he does not care that his women cheat on him with another fack fackkkk -_- they love the mc a lot and they go around touching each other pff and rika I do not forgive him I wish I had not read this shit

3yr
Propendol
PropendolLv2

another piece of shit with positive ratings from the bots. with huge holes in the narrative. emotionless characters made of cardboard. as well as a delusional mission to find out the beginning of everything(or whatever the wording was), which is performed by traveling through fictional worlds? it even sounds crazy.

3yr
Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Lo has mejorado bastante. Se siente muy ... como se dice, suave? Al leerlo. Sólo no olvides de escribir los gestos que hace la doctora o la forma de hablar que tiene junto con sus movimientos y lo meloso que es. Algo como: Shizuka se acerco y se apoyo en mi espalda, con un dedo haciendo círculos en mi mejillas "ne, ne Cloud-kun, Cloud-kun" Pero tu escribe lo mejor que yo jajajaj

4yr
TFH
TFHLv6

Author, te estan robando tu novela aca en WN. Usuario Xuefang1 ha usado tu novela para traducirla al ingles, cambiar unas cuantas cosas y hacerla pasar por suya. La novela se llama SOURCE : A MULTIVERSE TRAVEL. Incluso pide apoyo a Pâtrêôn para que pueda seguir creando contenido porque crear la historia es "Dificil"

2yr
Dark19
Dark19Lv11

5 estrellas es lo mínimo que puedo dar por un trabajo que parece una obra maestra.No se si tanto así pero a mi me encanta,gracias y continúa con el bien trabajo.

4yr
KingZerck
KingZerckLv5

Sigue con todo tu duro esfuerzo que nosotros (tus fans) te apoyamos👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Oniichanishere
OniichanishereLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Dark19
Dark19Lv11

Mejoró mucho de la novela anterior.Gracias y continúa. ¿Alguien sería tan amable de recomendarme una novela similar?😅😅😆😆😆🙏🙏👍👍 Ya sea en español o de HOTD. Me encanta y creo que está novela y las otras que escribió el autor son maravillosas y fácilmente se han convertido en unas de mis primeras novelas favoritas.

4yr
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