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2020-08-20 03:10

Empecemos con lo positivo: - Novela en Español (Los que hablan ingles "¡Es su turno de usar el traductor!") - Protagonista Despiadado - Harem Útil (Algunas) - Desarrollo del Harem (Algunas) - Historia Entretenida (Para pasar el rato) - Actualizaciones Constante. Puntos negativos: - Protagonista reactivo (Tienes sus momentos de actividad pero son en menor cantidad) - Sistema (Mi punto más subjetivo. El sistema da misiones y en ocasiones son "estúpidas". Como la misión de darle una novia a Ichika ¿Que me importa si el tiene novia?) - Personajes secundarios (Ok, este también es medio subjetivo. Komuro e Ichika son irrelevantes y no aportaron nada que siento que leer sobre ellos en el fic fue relleno del malo. También el otro del nuevo mundo que no me acuerdo como se llama) - Sigue mucho al canon (El protagonista "rejuvenece" para siempre tener la edad de los protagonistas originales y los cambios se mantienen al mínimo, su presencia no cambia casi nada a pesar de estar mucho tiempo en lugar) - Drama estúpido (Lo llamo así por que no tiene mucho sentido para mi Cloud elige linea de sangre de dragón y SORPRESA eso le trae muchísimos inconvenientes. Muy seguro que le va a dar también la enfermedad de mareo de los Dragon Slayer en un futuro) Termino aquí por que si no parecerá que odio el fic (Cuando no es así). Honestamente quisiera darle menos puntuación para equilibrar las clasificaciones pero no lo haré.

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