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Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv54yr
2020-03-06 12:47

Lo has mejorado bastante. Se siente muy ... como se dice, suave? Al leerlo. Sólo no olvides de escribir los gestos que hace la doctora o la forma de hablar que tiene junto con sus movimientos y lo meloso que es. Algo como: Shizuka se acerco y se apoyo en mi espalda, con un dedo haciendo círculos en mi mejillas "ne, ne Cloud-kun, Cloud-kun" Pero tu escribe lo mejor que yo jajajaj

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JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4

a esa succubus errante solo le faltan las orejas y cola de zorra y seria perfect 7w7

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Que mente tan perversa ... me gusta.

JosePascua:a esa succubus errante solo le faltan las orejas y cola de zorra y seria perfect 7w7
AzucenaRodriguez
AzucenaRodriguezLv10

Hola

Hollysummoapocaly:Que mente tan perversa ... me gusta.
AzucenaRodriguez
AzucenaRodriguezLv10

SaluDos desde España

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