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Lonmar
LonmarLv75yr
2020-05-01 20:58

I find that the presentation of the novel is somewhat lacking. it is the story of a man who lived and grew up during the zombie apocalypse, far into the future. at his death, he reincarnates at the very beginning of the apocalypse, long before the birth of his original self. afterwards, it's a rather standard zombie apocalypse story. I found it entertaining to find lots of little inconsistencies throughout history. but it was fine as long as it was "small" inconsistencies. Spoiler: I ended up cracking when the mc decided to protect the only person he cares about by an enemy ...

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TodoSama
TodoSamaLv4

"I ended up cracking when the mc decided to protect the only person he cares about by an enemy ... " I have no Idea what you want to say with this. Please eloberate.

Lonmar
LonmarLv7

SPOIL: in the chapter where I stopped (21) the mc meets an intelligent zombie. he threatens her and then forces her to serve / protect his sister. sister who has no way of defending herself yet. he therefore gives his enemy a hostage of choice ...

TodoSama:"I ended up cracking when the mc decided to protect the only person he cares about by an enemy ... " I have no Idea what you want to say with this. Please eloberate.
Crycks
CrycksLv14

Thanks to you i dropped before starting and saved some hours ^^ (****ty synopsis again)

Lonmar:SPOIL: in the chapter where I stopped (21) the mc meets an intelligent zombie. he threatens her and then forces her to serve / protect his sister. sister who has no way of defending herself yet. he therefore gives his enemy a hostage of choice ...
Friends101
Friends101Lv15

To be honest, I seem to think that this is **** near the later chapters, especially past Chapter 30. This is due to me seeing how that the background info in the storyline is utter garbage despite it being an apocalypse novel. May I remind everyone that apocalypse novels aren’t supposed to have the storyline be something like “Oh, I won a fight now I’m stronger and I won’t explain **** about how other people know the same thing I do” but rather “ oh, I won. now let me tell you about this awesome stuff I picked up and how good it is and I’ll explain things to my teammates every once in a while and explain the background storyline info while I’m at it”. This story only has the first one which shows to me how low quality the storyline is and I’m pretty surprised that it even got on trial read considering how bad it is. And Author, if you dare remove my review everyone’s going to know that you’re the kind of person who only likes good reviews to boost reader counts and not be fair.

Friends101
Friends101Lv15

To be honest, I seem to think that this is **** near the later chapters, especially past Chapter 30. This is due to me seeing how that the background info in the storyline is utter garbage despite it being an apocalypse novel. May I remind everyone that apocalypse novels aren’t supposed to have the storyline be something like “Oh, I won a fight now I’m stronger and I won’t explain **** about how other people know the same thing I do” but rather “ oh, I won. now let me tell you about this awesome stuff I picked up and how good it is and I’ll explain things to my teammates every once in a while and explain the background storyline info while I’m at it”. This story only has the first one which shows to me how low quality the storyline is and I’m pretty surprised that it even got on trial read considering how bad it is. And Author, if you dare remove my review everyone’s going to know that you’re the kind of person who only likes good reviews to boost reader counts and not be fair.

Friends101
Friends101Lv15

Also, May I say that I noticed there is a review limit which shows that the author is not confident of his own novel and may even think that its ****

Friends101
Friends101Lv15

If this thing even gets into the voting categories instead of being shoved aside then I’ll go and eat an entire oven made of seaweed.

SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

The author is Chinese bub, no actual control over this site. You mean TL / Translator.

Friends101:To be honest, I seem to think that this is **** near the later chapters, especially past Chapter 30. This is due to me seeing how that the background info in the storyline is utter garbage despite it being an apocalypse novel. May I remind everyone that apocalypse novels aren’t supposed to have the storyline be something like “Oh, I won a fight now I’m stronger and I won’t explain **** about how other people know the same thing I do” but rather “ oh, I won. now let me tell you about this awesome stuff I picked up and how good it is and I’ll explain things to my teammates every once in a while and explain the background storyline info while I’m at it”. This story only has the first one which shows to me how low quality the storyline is and I’m pretty surprised that it even got on trial read considering how bad it is. And Author, if you dare remove my review everyone’s going to know that you’re the kind of person who only likes good reviews to boost reader counts and not be fair.
SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

Also Webnovel doesn't give a **** about fairness

Friends101:To be honest, I seem to think that this is **** near the later chapters, especially past Chapter 30. This is due to me seeing how that the background info in the storyline is utter garbage despite it being an apocalypse novel. May I remind everyone that apocalypse novels aren’t supposed to have the storyline be something like “Oh, I won a fight now I’m stronger and I won’t explain **** about how other people know the same thing I do” but rather “ oh, I won. now let me tell you about this awesome stuff I picked up and how good it is and I’ll explain things to my teammates every once in a while and explain the background storyline info while I’m at it”. This story only has the first one which shows to me how low quality the storyline is and I’m pretty surprised that it even got on trial read considering how bad it is. And Author, if you dare remove my review everyone’s going to know that you’re the kind of person who only likes good reviews to boost reader counts and not be fair.
Hushparadox
HushparadoxLv15

You're pretty dumb are you.

Friends101:To be honest, I seem to think that this is **** near the later chapters, especially past Chapter 30. This is due to me seeing how that the background info in the storyline is utter garbage despite it being an apocalypse novel. May I remind everyone that apocalypse novels aren’t supposed to have the storyline be something like “Oh, I won a fight now I’m stronger and I won’t explain **** about how other people know the same thing I do” but rather “ oh, I won. now let me tell you about this awesome stuff I picked up and how good it is and I’ll explain things to my teammates every once in a while and explain the background storyline info while I’m at it”. This story only has the first one which shows to me how low quality the storyline is and I’m pretty surprised that it even got on trial read considering how bad it is. And Author, if you dare remove my review everyone’s going to know that you’re the kind of person who only likes good reviews to boost reader counts and not be fair.
ramp_seeker
ramp_seekerLv5

Bro control yourself otherwise you will puke blood ...

Friends101:If this thing even gets into the voting categories instead of being shoved aside then I’ll go and eat an entire oven made of seaweed.
Ximen_Chuixue
Ximen_ChuixueLv5

How about BECAUSE he came from the future, he knew that zombies can be tamed and be obedient???

RUE_12
RUE_12Lv12

Lol enjoy your seaweeds since the trial is rigged.

Friends101:If this thing even gets into the voting categories instead of being shoved aside then I’ll go and eat an entire oven made of seaweed.
upndown
upndownLv2

If you are looking at a good and well paced background to an apocalypse, why not read Plague doctor instead. It's also in the trial read.

Lonmar
LonmarLv7

it was not out when I wrote this review. I intend to test it ^^

upndown:If you are looking at a good and well paced background to an apocalypse, why not read Plague doctor instead. It's also in the trial read.
Joshua_Lee_5926
Joshua_Lee_5926Lv2

dude if you just keep on reading a few more chapters the zombie tries to eat her but apparently she has a black belt in tawendo and beat up the zombie, the reason the mc left the zombie with her sister was so she could watch it to make sure it doesn't run away. You really need to be more patient when reading instead of just instantly dropping the novel the moment you see something inconsistent.

Lonmar:SPOIL: in the chapter where I stopped (21) the mc meets an intelligent zombie. he threatens her and then forces her to serve / protect his sister. sister who has no way of defending herself yet. he therefore gives his enemy a hostage of choice ...
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SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

Okay I will start off by saying I read some of the Dark King the other novel by this author 😑 my impression although neutral on that novel before I dropped it didn't and doesn't weigh in on my opinion of this novel. No bias I assure you. This novel is a little better than sh*t. The premise of reverse incarnation is very unique and something I've wanted for a long time. That being said author didn't do anything with it. The author forsook any chance at the MC getting aquatinted with the modern world and did very little world building. To make matters worse the world building done before hand shows that the Earth he is on isn't actually the same as ours based off his family situation alone! If this story would have done away with that family background and done something more standard along with maybe allowing for mc to get more aquatinted with modern life and prepare for months instead of a extremely short period it would have been way better. Author is obviously trying to be as edgy as possible. The author literally spare no rod being as descriptive as his limited writing capability can allow. Sorry I hate it when babies aren't finished off quickly and body mutilated after zombiefication. Mc has the memories of the host but it's literally not worth a damn but adding one burden on his shoulder. I stopped reading do to the first interaction he had with the golden hound. I found the story tedious so I didn't go far in. It's just your generic apoco story just mc has knowledge of the future and a stupid burden. I got like 7 chapters in before getting fed up so feel free to not take my word for it

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