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Eliselin
EliselinLv55yr
2020-05-03 01:21

I like the story.the caracter and the world are well developed.i'm waiting to see the progression.i like that he is taking care of the sister and protects her. A big like

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SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

Okay I will start off by saying I read some of the Dark King the other novel by this author 😑 my impression although neutral on that novel before I dropped it didn't and doesn't weigh in on my opinion of this novel. No bias I assure you. This novel is a little better than sh*t. The premise of reverse incarnation is very unique and something I've wanted for a long time. That being said author didn't do anything with it. The author forsook any chance at the MC getting aquatinted with the modern world and did very little world building. To make matters worse the world building done before hand shows that the Earth he is on isn't actually the same as ours based off his family situation alone! If this story would have done away with that family background and done something more standard along with maybe allowing for mc to get more aquatinted with modern life and prepare for months instead of a extremely short period it would have been way better. Author is obviously trying to be as edgy as possible. The author literally spare no rod being as descriptive as his limited writing capability can allow. Sorry I hate it when babies aren't finished off quickly and body mutilated after zombiefication. Mc has the memories of the host but it's literally not worth a damn but adding one burden on his shoulder. I stopped reading do to the first interaction he had with the golden hound. I found the story tedious so I didn't go far in. It's just your generic apoco story just mc has knowledge of the future and a stupid burden. I got like 7 chapters in before getting fed up so feel free to not take my word for it

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