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Unknown_Variable
Unknown_VariableLv24yr
2020-07-15 06:48

if your actually willing to read this is heavily recommend just staying on the synopsis and imagining how the book will go instead for a few hours since you would get far far far more enjoyment out of that and less "this because of that" "that and that" "that happened because that" which is also known as machine translation and not edited whatsoever. honestly though this is a REALLY bad machine translation so please just don't waste your life trying to rewrite the whole story in your head as you go so it makes sense. but if you do PLEASE type it out as you go and send me a link so i can read it. also the only reason this is 1.4 is because it seems like the updates are stable enough.

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Aklyf
AklyfLv5

Then why this novel having so many positive 5 and 4 stars review 😅

ZedukelStarstryker
ZedukelStarstrykerLv12

bots and (maybe) non english speakers i guess

Aklyf:Then why this novel having so many positive 5 and 4 stars review 😅
ZedukelStarstryker
ZedukelStarstrykerLv12

bots and (maybe) non english speakers i guess

Aklyf:Then why this novel having so many positive 5 and 4 stars review 😅
Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightLv13

uhh, i get your point, but this is an original work, not translated from any other language at least on this website

Unruh_
Unruh_Lv11

You can write your novel in your native language and then translate it to english..

Purple_Midnight:uhh, i get your point, but this is an original work, not translated from any other language at least on this website
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