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2021-02-17 07:09

This is incredible, the characters and how they interact feel real,the banter is on point and the overall quality of the story is top notch,atleast in my opinion this is one of the best stories on this website. The MC doesn't take shit from anybody and his personality matches his background , all the characters up to this point that have been introduced matter to the story atleast to some degree and have their own way of doing things. Really, really recommend.

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Barbare
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Don't worry, I may be the author of this novel, but I know how to be unbiased in my self-criticism. Where to start... Oh yes, so the writing during the first 30-40 chapters is rather rough either in grammar or in the accuracy of some information, the reason of that is that English isn't my first language and that taking into account that this is my first novel I didn't took enough time to verify certain things I wrote, please bear with me, I have improved a lot in the meantime (I swear). I'm planning to edit all of this but it's not going to happen right away... Tell yourself that if you like the beginning, the story can only get better and better as you go through the chapters. Also, the biggest weakness I would attribute to my novel is the pace of publishing, I'm not regular (though that might change in the next few months as I'm on vacation and fully focused on this)... BUT (yes, we're finally getting to the part where I stop bashing my own novel and that I will tell you why you should read it). -Although some of the (secondary) characters may sometimes seem stereotypical (anyway, if they do, they won't stay in the story long enough to have an importance), each of the main characters is unique and if you like characters who act logically you will love the MC and his compagnions (except one, or maybe two). -The story revolves around different mythologies, different pantheons of deities as well as different folklores and on this side you will be spoiled. -I am very active in the comments as well as on discord (Barbare#6899) so if you have questions, ask them and you will be sure to get an answer. So... I think that's more or less everything

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