ReaderNumber74

Yeh, I got ahead of myself lol

Great!

Oh, I got confused haha

Strength mastery?

Hahahahaha, it was too good to be true! If there's anything guaranteed in this life, it's death and taxes, better get used to it lol

Jörmungandr ahh snake

By the way, just in case you didn't know... that auxiliary chapter (the update for the power scaling ratings and stuff) set my reading progress back to "2/24", don't know if that's intentional. Might of just been me.

Ayooo?!

I have not seen any gramatical errors to date, the way the author writes is interesting and actually evokes atleast some thought into the way the characters or events will develop later down the line. In this particular fic, he's basing the characters on PTJ's Lookism, but this is obviously an AU, and we're already seeing how he would give his own spin on the characters. So that's a 5 on Writing Quality, Story Development, and Character Design, just from what we have seen so far (as of Chapter 17), the updates are frequent (that's another 5 on the Stability of Updates), and the World Background is taken straight from Lookism, so I don't think that it's fair to rate it, as such I will also be giving it a five. I recommend it, it's fun and it gives that "Why would the author do this!?" (talking about PTJ in this case) relief. All in all, I have hope for this fic! PD: PTJ is a great artist, however, it is true that with the huge cast of side-characters and storylines that he's introduced in an effort of making Lookism more marketable (along with his increasingly better art... for the most part), the story's concept has kind of fallen apart, where originally the story was about... well lookism, and how appearances matter so much in our society today, the way of introducing this plot point (the second body) kept spiriling and spiraling... until it became a fighting manhwa, which I actually enjoy, but then it moved even further into what is now made fun of as "Gangism", and I stopped caring about anything other than the fights and the art, which is a shame, because we know from first-hand experience that PTJ can make a good story, but it seems that he now just farms hype to squeeze money, even going to the point of (allegedly) using AI to take care of the art. I have high hope for this fanfic, I'd like it to take everything that the fans love and build opon it, as well as around it. What I don't want it to do is tear it down and make another story with just the same characters and stick "Lookism" in the title for the sake of views, which so far, hasn't happened, thankfully. Mr_Graythorn also replies to feedback, and seems fun, and not the tradionally stuck-up "Christopher Nolan" type. Which is alway a plus!

Yo, did you change the thumbnail or am i tripping on something?! It looks like that gun picture combined with the second body's original consciousness or something