webnovel
RandomLocation
RandomLocationLv103yr
2021-01-02 19:45

I can just appreciate that you write such a good book! I just loveeee it🥳❤️ ------ Soooo I catched up with with the chapters and can say that the book is really well written as well as the character design. The Mc is pretty Badass and knows what he is doing (in terms of survival and not women...*caugh*caugh* Amandla) and the side characters are as well pretty damn good (execpt Francis he is not my type characteristically because I find him a bit annoying). I would love too she Lazar keep growing and find new powers! Keep up your great work Author-san and happy new year and enjoy your holidays! 🥳❤️

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
Replies2
Barbare
BarbareAuthor

Thank you very much, I also wish you a great year 2021. By the way, I'm sorry I haven't posted any chapters for a few days, it's just that my New Year's Eve party extended to the next day... Anyway, I started writing again today. I'm glad you like Lazar, and as far as Amandla is concerned, is it that you don't particularly like her or that you don't want a love affair between her and Lazar? I agree with you about Francis, and that's the way I want him to be. I hope you'll like the powers he'll gain, I spent a lot of time racking my brain on this (I even made sketches to represent the skill trees of all the important characters) :-] Anyway, see you soon!

RandomLocation
RandomLocationLv10

Nono I meant that I would really like to have a bit of romance in your story. I just meant that the character of Lazar is just not aware on how to handle girls (it's not a critic it's just how I see him). I'm looking forward to what you are doing with Francis and if you put some romance in your story. It's okay that you had some free time you need it! So that you are at 100% again 😉

Other Reviews
Barbare
BarbareAuthor

Don't worry, I may be the author of this novel, but I know how to be unbiased in my self-criticism. Where to start... Oh yes, so the writing during the first 30-40 chapters is rather rough either in grammar or in the accuracy of some information, the reason of that is that English isn't my first language and that taking into account that this is my first novel I didn't took enough time to verify certain things I wrote, please bear with me, I have improved a lot in the meantime (I swear). I'm planning to edit all of this but it's not going to happen right away... Tell yourself that if you like the beginning, the story can only get better and better as you go through the chapters. Also, the biggest weakness I would attribute to my novel is the pace of publishing, I'm not regular (though that might change in the next few months as I'm on vacation and fully focused on this)... BUT (yes, we're finally getting to the part where I stop bashing my own novel and that I will tell you why you should read it). -Although some of the (secondary) characters may sometimes seem stereotypical (anyway, if they do, they won't stay in the story long enough to have an importance), each of the main characters is unique and if you like characters who act logically you will love the MC and his compagnions (except one, or maybe two). -The story revolves around different mythologies, different pantheons of deities as well as different folklores and on this side you will be spoiled. -I am very active in the comments as well as on discord (Barbare#6899) so if you have questions, ask them and you will be sure to get an answer. So... I think that's more or less everything

Related Stories