Writing quality is meh. It's got some confusing wording rarely and there are some grammar mistakes. There isn't really much of a story. The author tries to take the comedic route while writing but tends to over-exagerate on most parts. For example the MC is basically a slave to his system since the punishments are usually things the MC doesn't want to happen to him(eg. humiliation, physical adjustment of the top of my head), it's basically the driving force of the story with the body's past affecting what the MC does(social circle). It tends to get annoying if you are looking for a proper story or if you don't like anime comedy (tsunderes, comedic girl hitting guy, etc.). And the system does basically anything it can to make the MC miserable(eg. new soul likes grown up girls so system tends to give the MC summons with lolis, extreme punishments). The characters go with over-exagerated personalities(violent tsundere, over-exagerating MC; the type to yell 'he likes bishoujo and not loli) and the MC is influenced with the past memories of the body he inhabits, so he likes lolis but hates lolis. Other characters don't feel that real except for that one character trait you remember them by, so like tsundere, trusting, honest, overly-perverted, etc. The world could be developed a lot more, it's basically a mashup of a lot of anime with some things being the core. Overall I do think it can be great but with how it is I honestly just get annoyed reading it, some might like it, but I don't.
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