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SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv134yr
2020-06-01 14:34

At first I thought 'Ok lets read something new' then I found this novel. I thought that 'The rating is good.....views are good and the summary is also intreasting'. Then I read the first chapter which was not so bad then second....Ok lets see.....then third....later chapters maybe good.....then for about 50 chapter and came to a realisation that this novel is ****. THE END

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RedLaw
RedLawLv13

Hello. I am about to begin. Since Since you reached 50 chapters. I guess something must have interested you. Could I know why you thought it was bad after 50 chapters?

SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13

First of all MC is beta, second MC has low IQ, third MC is a sissy which sucks, fourth MC is 100% lolicon, fifth according to the novel when MC transmigrated in his new body he also inherited the new body's owner's weakness of lolies which also breaks the concept of space, time and reality and **** even after absorbing all his memories, he is still the same. Now, the most important thing, the system of this novel is worst one too, it is too forced. Rewards are also useless.

RedLaw:Hello. I am about to begin. Since Since you reached 50 chapters. I guess something must have interested you. Could I know why you thought it was bad after 50 chapters?
RedLaw
RedLawLv13

🤣Yeah. I can see how it would be frustrating

SabertoothX15:First of all MC is beta, second MC has low IQ, third MC is a sissy which sucks, fourth MC is 100% lolicon, fifth according to the novel when MC transmigrated in his new body he also inherited the new body's owner's weakness of lolies which also breaks the concept of space, time and reality and **** even after absorbing all his memories, he is still the same. Now, the most important thing, the system of this novel is worst one too, it is too forced. Rewards are also useless.
Shinmatsu
ShinmatsuLv11

Since when is being a lolicon a problem?

SabertoothX15:First of all MC is beta, second MC has low IQ, third MC is a sissy which sucks, fourth MC is 100% lolicon, fifth according to the novel when MC transmigrated in his new body he also inherited the new body's owner's weakness of lolies which also breaks the concept of space, time and reality and **** even after absorbing all his memories, he is still the same. Now, the most important thing, the system of this novel is worst one too, it is too forced. Rewards are also useless.
i3bdul
i3bdulLv14

Ni.ga wtf when has it not been a problem

Shinmatsu:Since when is being a lolicon a problem?
DaoistSenzu
DaoistSenzuLv4

Naw its fine as long as they're legal, liking children is a problem tho

i3bdul:Ni.ga wtf when has it not been a problem
SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13

Yeh..

DaoistSenzu:Naw its fine as long as they're legal, liking children is a problem tho
SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13

Those who read this should know that the MC will accept Nobuna as his wife even after she tried to kill him, molest him, threaten him, blackmail him, bullied him, torture him and almost killed him in front of the whole school which is enough to make anyone traumatized and do suicide. So, those who still chose to read this novel then you all have trash taste in anime and are not even worth explaining you.

GokuSayan
GokuSayanLv4

You can ignore Nobuna, it's not like she's the only character in the novel.

SabertoothX15:Those who read this should know that the MC will accept Nobuna as his wife even after she tried to kill him, molest him, threaten him, blackmail him, bullied him, torture him and almost killed him in front of the whole school which is enough to make anyone traumatized and do suicide. So, those who still chose to read this novel then you all have trash taste in anime and are not even worth explaining you.
PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

+1

RedLaw:🤣Yeah. I can see how it would be frustrating
PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

+1

DaoistSenzu:Naw its fine as long as they're legal, liking children is a problem tho
James_carl
James_carlLv3

i thought this was comedy but what i got was dissapointment.

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