I'm sorry for giving this rate but I really can't take it anymore. First of all writing quality, I'm dying because the author can't differentiate between his/her. You should try editing your story before continuing, it's killing me. I already saw some comments that want to correct you but you never edited them for your future readers which is a bad move for me. There are a lot of people who are not good at English grammar but please know basic grammar things. Next is the story development, the story development is good at first but I got bored when I reach the 300+ chapter. The MC hmm, I don't like him. It looks like he's always playful which is what I don't like. Updating Stability, I once read it before but I also stopped but I think it's slow. World Background, everything was good but you can't simply just mixed it. Too much Anime World in one place. I can't remember who's who.
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