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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv65yr
2020-03-10 11:35

I want to like this story but I can't, it was good until that Nobuna girl appear, acting unreasonable despite being the school principle, calling the MC trash and try to kill him cus she doesn't like that they're engage, for fck's sake, it wasn't him that decide it, and worst of all, MC tolerate it, I'm done.

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LittleApple
4.5
783 Chs

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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

whats wrong with that? being forgiving is one of the best traits of a generous man?

5yr
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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

You’re not wrong but that is under the assumption that the girl genuinely feel guilt about her action and tried to atone for it, I don’t think that’s the case here however, if not because of the damage it would cause if MC lose his mind, she wouldn’t stop, even then she didn’t even apologize by herself or tried to atone for it, she even make demand of him if he want forgiveness, and MC just go with it. This is not being generous, it just weak will and cowardly, no wonder he’s called “sissy” in the story.

LittleApple:whats wrong with that? being forgiving is one of the best traits of a generous man?
5yr
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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

Well you're right my expectation for this chapter is to make Nobuna a tsundare but i did not expect that I did not get the right words or things right

Alex1911:You’re not wrong but that is under the assumption that the girl genuinely feel guilt about her action and tried to atone for it, I don’t think that’s the case here however, if not because of the damage it would cause if MC lose his mind, she wouldn’t stop, even then she didn’t even apologize by herself or tried to atone for it, she even make demand of him if he want forgiveness, and MC just go with it. This is not being generous, it just weak will and cowardly, no wonder he’s called “sissy” in the story.
5yr
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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

Aye, I think Nobuna in her anime isn’t that bad, I like the original one actually but the one here is just.....

LittleApple:Well you're right my expectation for this chapter is to make Nobuna a tsundare but i did not expect that I did not get the right words or things right
5yr
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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

Do you think I should edit some chapters or just continue and improve her personality later, I feel that I should do the latter

5yr
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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

tbh I don’t know, I’m suck at writing story but unless it’s too bad wouldn’t going back and change it affect the flow of the story?

LittleApple:Do you think I should edit some chapters or just continue and improve her personality later, I feel that I should do the latter
5yr
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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

It's not to bad right?

5yr
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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

So the only thing I need to do is to improve Nobuna in other chapter and let her look like a tsundare girl.

Alex1911:tbh I don’t know, I’m suck at writing story but unless it’s too bad wouldn’t going back and change it affect the flow of the story?
5yr
11
Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

I think so, tsundere taken too far like Louis in Familar of zero is horrible after all, it’s just abusive.

LittleApple:So the only thing I need to do is to improve Nobuna in other chapter and let her look like a tsundare girl.
5yr
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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

But i think its not, after all I'm the almighty System i like giving Lou a big headache

Alex1911:I think so, tsundere taken too far like Louis in Familar of zero is horrible after all, it’s just abusive.
5yr
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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

If I have a system like that, I would contemplate jumping off a cliff and see if I get reincarnated again.

5yr
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Auriolus
AuriolusLv5

It's good that I stopped before it's too late. What kind of system is that? Yeah I know it's for "comedy".

LittleApple:But i think its not, after all I'm the almighty System i like giving Lou a big headache
5yr
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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

That was always my thought, in such *humorous* stories.... But I guess, someone like it rough

Alex1911:If I have a system like that, I would contemplate jumping off a cliff and see if I get reincarnated again.
5yr
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Suriel8224
Suriel8224Lv5

I like tsundere girls if I'm watching but if I'm reading I'll get annoyed everytime

5yr
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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

I like tsundere depend on the kind, Rin Tosaka, Misaka Mikoto is nice but if it's the kind like Louise in Familiar of zero then I'll stay away from those :D

Suriel8224:I like tsundere girls if I'm watching but if I'm reading I'll get annoyed everytime
5yr
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Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

does it have romance like flirt whith his girls and treats them like someone special to him ?

LittleApple:whats wrong with that? being forgiving is one of the best traits of a generous man?
5yr
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Elder
ElderLv11

So another slave of the sistem

4yr
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Refund_Amount
Refund_AmountLv1

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4yr
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Refund_Amount
Refund_AmountLv1

All bank customer care number 6297161015

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Skill_apex
Skill_apexLv4

You think it is not unreasonable become principle of school at age of 16? Man she is 16 years old

4yr
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