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AlexVv_Gamer
AlexVv_GamerLv13yr
2021-09-23 05:15

I can only say ... wow. I loved this fanfic. Character development is pretty good. It is not necessary to have seen any of the original stories, because the author makes sure to explain. And if you think something does not make sense, it is because it is preparing for a future event in history.

Mikaelson Family Across The Multiverse

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4.4
63 Chs

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Bloodydemonking_19
Bloodydemonking_19Lv12

PLEASE don't drop this and finish it I love this fan fic and I want to keep reading it they don't make that much of the original fan fic anymore and if they do it all ways and up being drop and this is a good one

5yr

1CosmicOwl
1CosmicOwlLv13

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5yr
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

It is really Great, even if your Story just started but i can't wait for the next chapter! I hope that this Story gets more attention and a Ranking to show you that you have all our Support!!!!!!

5yr
CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

it start good but then get worse and worse..right now is just a fast pace summary and sadly really boring one! .

3yr
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

it's kind of boring to compare to other stories, but i would recommend reading "as chronicas de vali masters" (everything missing here is there) the plot is forced to stay the same, even when the MC changes a lot (and this without any real justification , just padding), writing and development as a whole need a big improvement. and I'm not talking about changing the MC's personality, but about the author's own mistakes to force the story when I mention the other book

3yr
Nevren
NevrenLv1

Not bad, but gets significantly worse as time goes on. In general the beginning was pretty good, the wishes were odd at first but they come together well later on, proving that the mc had a plan all along but as the story goes on, especially once the mc gets to VD:L it becomes significantly worse, characters (especially the mc) begin acting completely out of character, like they suddenly become different people. Very disappointing in general. Still at least the first 2/3's of the story is pretty good and worth your time even if that's not true for the last 1/3.

3yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Its interesting....like I dont know jack **** about the universe MC is in..neither the characters but I am interested....so author bro.....maybe provided some info..cause I thought the mother was evil dude.......also just saying,..dont mix marvel and DC......just dont..**: MC seems too weak despite his OP wishes....keep him godlike....[anyone of his wishes could make him a god] Suggestion and worlds: OP MC....provide info for universe...add some romance and fluff but pls build it and no sad angsty tragic ****....keep it happy and fluff...just no wife stealing or moms....also if harem keep it small....also....if anime worlds pls go before cannon.... -Pirates of the carribean? -Frozen--you know why😉😊 -One piece [12 years before] -fairy tail [400 years before] -for the 2 worlds above..would be dope if MC self inserts instead of travelling

5yr
GeneralAldrnari
GeneralAldrnariLv5

Was 5/5 at the start of the story and in the middle part of the story but as the Astrid arc begins the story feels like someone murdered and replaced the author and destroyed the story. it's like a train on the path of heaven suddenly derailed in the path of trash. Sigh

2yr
Zildath
ZildathLv12

The grandfather thingy is just straight BS. Bor (which is Thor’s grandfather name) is supposed to be in hel cuz he died dishonorably and he’s vindictive, paranoid warmonger not some nice loving grandpa, even at one point Thor kills him after hela revives him but in Thor’s defence he didn’t know it was his granpa and Bor never mentioned to tell him that in the comics. You should just retcon the whole grandpa thing imo it just sounds stupid. Overall it’s a good fanfic if you ignore the little inconsistencies here and there.

3yr
zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv4

Super cool 😎 Interesting Unique Love it 😍 Also I can’t wait for more chapters I hope there is more chapters about MC kol ,with original sibling…

2yr
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