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Robotic? No, he just seems like a nervous little kid with a need to seem interesting to get attention and make everyone say he's cool.
It feels like a high school kid wrote all of this.
Separate the damn paragraphs! How is it possible that you read the original novel and don't know how to do something so simple? And decide if you are going to narrate in first or third person, you start a sentence in third person and for some reason you end it in first person.
I can understand that, but I'm not used to hearing the tarot card called that.
I still find it stupid that his title is "Pope" and not "Hierophant."
Do you have the habit of reading with your eyes closed?
I'd have to give a huge time skip. Do you really expect a piece of trash like him to change his personality for the better in just a few days? Especially with that kind of system.
I've seen this joke many times, but I think it was very well executed this time.
The change in personality must be slow but constant, otherwise it will seem very forced.