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LazyGod7009
LazyGod7009Lv43yr
2022-02-11 04:22

u read all of it it is good I know he probably won't see this but Can you start writing again it was good And one of the only ones that I can find where me is a Primordial God And Has more then 1 Chapter

Supreme Primordial God

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4.6
66 Chs

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SioMino
SioMinoLv15

Ahhhh, so is this a incest harem with the mother? Oh, I sure hope so because I’m enjoying his mother so far, lol. Even though I’m only on chapter 4. Incest is wincest!!!

5yr

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

OP MC..dope....just build it and try to make MC travel and explore and do **** instead of some wish fulfillment **** like getting women.....add some romance and fluff..but build the romance and if harem keep it small..also dont make the MC some idiotic pervert keep him cool and smart....anyway goodluck and goodshow

5yr
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

It’s kinda unrealistic. A goddess going to a **** world like naruto. I mean I like naruto but there stupid ideology to brainwash people is fucking stupid, sacrifice yourself for the village, thats bull**** why would anybody wanna sacrifice there self for the people who don’t care about you, and leave your family behind that loves.I mean look at naruto who does not even take care of his family. That’s why his son hate him. He cares more about other people than his family. And the MC looks so stupid. His probably going to be like hagoromo and his brother who gets controlled by human and betray his mother. I fucking hate hagoromo , he loves human more than his mother. His mother got betrayed twice. I mean if I was her I would destroy the world too. This is why I hate naruto world. Cause Everyone is stupid like naruto. I bet he would sacrifice his family for the village. And the system is kinda stupid, He has a mother that has all knowledge in omniverse And she can give him any skill and art of any kind. His system should be to guide him not like other systems. Game system is good.

5yr
KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14

Love it so far. I like the take on having the mother travel to worlds with him as he gets stronger and understands more energies and powers so he can further unlock his bloodline plus her personality is really funny and interesting almost like Kushina herself. Are you planning on writing his adventures in other worlds as well after he’s done with Naruto like one piece, bleach, fairy tale, etc.?

5yr
Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Jelly_Red_Kuma
Jelly_Red_KumaLv14

Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............!

5yr
TintedvCeo
TintedvCeoLv5

OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls

5yr
Silent_Cuber
Silent_CuberLv3

is this dropped? it is one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever red..........................................................................................

3yr
Thumbiko_Mkhala
Thumbiko_MkhalaLv4

Not well written , if the reader has not watched naruto before then it makes no sense, unrealistic on top of that and the mc's character not well developed Apart from trying to remove the limiters has no other clear goal like how he wants to live his life u know👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

4yr
Godack
GodackLv2

Writing quality: It is not perfect but you can read it clearly and understand it without much diffeculty. Updates: Good. Story Development: A guy dies and gets hit by his mother that he is the second strongest being in the multiverse. A bit faste pace in the beginning and after 10 or so chapters it transfers over into a steady pace. Character Design: A lot of characters are obviously from the anime itself, but the main character and his mother are original and have a "good" background. World Background: Original except for the elemantal nations part. So what I have noticed in this novel is that the mc is the son of the strongest being there is, so he is literally the second strongst being. He is a god, yet he decides to get an harem out of mortal woman who no doubt will be made immortal later on, this is not bad! I just want to tell this. So what I don't get is, his mother is the creator of everything yet she can't create a body for her son that is strong enough to handle his power? Like he has to go to another world just to get a better body? A bit confusing but overall a good book!

4yr
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