Item: Supreme Primordial God
Rating: 1.8
Author: Movezbatch

MovezbatchLv45yr

2020-04-13 10:27

First of all start is stupid. dude is a primodal god and his mother sealed his powers so that his birth wouldn't destroy the universe. it'S okay till now but after that thing get... sloppy. As his powers comes from system and seal he can have literally every power and his only limit is his imagination (we see he has all mangekyo sharingan abilites when he awakened them. why? because he has the origin bloodline and he can have all of them. fucking idiot if he has all of them why are they the only ones shown in the show?) ugh its not that bad actually but mistakes are stands out. maybe im just being bratty

Supreme Primordial God

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