Item: Supreme Primordial God
Rating: 3.4
Author: Godack

GodackLv24yr

2020-08-16 02:18

Writing quality: It is not perfect but you can read it clearly and understand it without much diffeculty. Updates: Good. Story Development: A guy dies and gets hit by his mother that he is the second strongest being in the multiverse. A bit faste pace in the beginning and after 10 or so chapters it transfers over into a steady pace. Character Design: A lot of characters are obviously from the anime itself, but the main character and his mother are original and have a "good" background. World Background: Original except for the elemantal nations part. So what I have noticed in this novel is that the mc is the son of the strongest being there is, so he is literally the second strongst being. He is a god, yet he decides to get an harem out of mortal woman who no doubt will be made immortal later on, this is not bad! I just want to tell this. So what I don't get is, his mother is the creator of everything yet she can't create a body for her son that is strong enough to handle his power? Like he has to go to another world just to get a better body? A bit confusing but overall a good book!

Supreme Primordial God

Saintz

4.6

66 Chs

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BrymrLv3

Oi who is in the harem tho?

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SioMinoLv15

Ahhhh, so is this a incest harem with the mother? Oh, I sure hope so because I’m enjoying his mother so far, lol. Even though I’m only on chapter 4. Incest is wincest!!!

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amaturewriterLv4

OP MC..dope....just build it and try to make MC travel and explore and do **** instead of some wish fulfillment **** like getting women.....add some romance and fluff..but build the romance and if harem keep it small..also dont make the MC some idiotic pervert keep him cool and smart....anyway goodluck and goodshow

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Love it so far. I like the take on having the mother travel to worlds with him as he gets stronger and understands more energies and powers so he can further unlock his bloodline plus her personality is really funny and interesting almost like Kushina herself. Are you planning on writing his adventures in other worlds as well after he’s done with Naruto like one piece, bleach, fairy tale, etc.?

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