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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv125yr
2020-03-03 01:33

It’s kinda unrealistic. A goddess going to a **** world like naruto. I mean I like naruto but there stupid ideology to brainwash people is fucking stupid, sacrifice yourself for the village, thats bull**** why would anybody wanna sacrifice there self for the people who don’t care about you, and leave your family behind that loves.I mean look at naruto who does not even take care of his family. That’s why his son hate him. He cares more about other people than his family. And the MC looks so stupid. His probably going to be like hagoromo and his brother who gets controlled by human and betray his mother. I fucking hate hagoromo , he loves human more than his mother. His mother got betrayed twice. I mean if I was her I would destroy the world too. This is why I hate naruto world. Cause Everyone is stupid like naruto. I bet he would sacrifice his family for the village. And the system is kinda stupid, He has a mother that has all knowledge in omniverse And she can give him any skill and art of any kind. His system should be to guide him not like other systems. Game system is good.

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Saintz
SaintzAuthor

Then you should read first, hagoromo is dead, the system Just give information, and resonable Quest, and where is the fun in having every skill given by his mother?

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

That just stupid. It’s makes the MC and the mother look stupid. It make sense if his not with his mother but this is just stupid. Why does his system even have shop. When he can get thinks free. That makes the mother looks stupid.

Saintz:Then you should read first, hagoromo is dead, the system Just give information, and resonable Quest, and where is the fun in having every skill given by his mother?
Saintz
SaintzAuthor

His breathing style was created after buying, and some jutsus, and krav maga are from the system shop. I just dont see any meaning in buying thousands skills or bloodlines and using Just a few abilities , his restaurant and ingredients, come from the shop too.

Venom_God:That just stupid. It’s makes the MC and the mother look stupid. It make sense if his not with his mother but this is just stupid. Why does his system even have shop. When he can get thinks free. That makes the mother looks stupid.
Saintz
SaintzAuthor

And i understand your point, konoha made Sakumo a shinobi monster suicide because of one mistake even his comrades turn their backs to him, but i have to agree when you said that Hiruzen will of fire is brainwashing.

Venom_God:That just stupid. It’s makes the MC and the mother look stupid. It make sense if his not with his mother but this is just stupid. Why does his system even have shop. When he can get thinks free. That makes the mother looks stupid.
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Whatever. Just don’t make the MC stupid enough to believe the stupid ideology. Cause everyone in naruto world sacrifice there own family and don’t make the MC care about following the story line cause that’s stupid

Saintz:Then you should read first, hagoromo is dead, the system Just give information, and resonable Quest, and where is the fun in having every skill given by his mother?
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

You can't use what happened in boruto as an example. Naruto can make 1000 shadow clones, but he didn't let them do all of his hokage work while he stayed with his family. It's not like they're going to take damage and get dispersed inside the village.

newthings
newthingsLv6

ok from these comments i can understand one thing Naruto is just stupid "stupid" XDXDXD

Overlord_1000
Overlord_1000Lv4

you can remove your review because it's stupid you know? At no time does he sacrifice his family and he doesn't give a damn about the village the only reason he supports the village is that his tsunade wife is the hokage

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

fucking stupid, did u even read what I said

Overlord_1000:you can remove your review because it's stupid you know? At no time does he sacrifice his family and he doesn't give a damn about the village the only reason he supports the village is that his tsunade wife is the hokage
Overlord_1000
Overlord_1000Lv4

yes

Venom_God:fucking stupid, did u even read what I said
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

u did not cuz the **** u said does not even make sense stupid, read what u said and what i said, fucking retard

Overlord_1000:yes
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Lol every time I find your reviews or comments in fanfics I have 3 reactions. I either find them funny, agree with them, or rage at them.

Venom_God:u did not cuz the **** u said does not even make sense stupid, read what u said and what i said, fucking retard
_BLANK_BLANK_
_BLANK_BLANK_Lv3

According to your statement OUR army that die at border are also stupid protecting the like of you, me evenone they also left behind there loved one ... you really need a reality check The way you sound is Like being a dickhead To you innocent life didn't have a little value then you are literally the lord of selfish, on one side if someone protected someone you know then he is Super Good if not then he is just a brainwash stupid that is giving his life for nothing You really don't sound who would have values Helping some one selflessly is never wasted that man will get its reward For them there village is like there home/ Country and armys are trained to be selfless Fanfic really destroyed many mind Or narrowed down to view a thing. *sigh* Generation these days are going down too low to think like that. Jumping to conclusions without checking it from a different point of view or simply from others

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