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wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv44yr
2020-07-03 03:10

It's not a bad story but it seem more of your beta mc harems . When you see harem tag you would expect at least 2 ppl to be with the mc not 1. Japan has abused the crap out of the tag turning almost every mc into a beta mc, and not actually having a harem but a struggle through romance. Story is still ongoing so I could be wrong but up to 100 it's up come back to read after it gains more chapters if still on the same route up have to drop, for a simple reason it's not a harem ... good character development though.

(Un) Fortunately the Yandere is Not After Me

bigbear51
4.6
205 Chs

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wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv4

*it is *I'll

4yr
bigbear51
bigbear51Author

Thank you for the review. As well as for reading the story as far as you have. However, I have to be honest to you because I don't want to waste your time. I don't plan on this being a harem like other stories written on the site. It really is based on Japanese harem stories, which is closer to being about a single girl. I'm sorry, but I didn't want to give you false hope about what the future of the plot is going to be.

4yr
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wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv4

That's a bit unfortunate the character building was on point. Well good luck to you, the story was good so far but I'll be dropping.

bigbear51:Thank you for the review. As well as for reading the story as far as you have. However, I have to be honest to you because I don't want to waste your time. I don't plan on this being a harem like other stories written on the site. It really is based on Japanese harem stories, which is closer to being about a single girl. I'm sorry, but I didn't want to give you false hope about what the future of the plot is going to be.
4yr
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THORN
THORNLv1

I thank you author for clarifying this. Hope you put it on sypnosis or make a comment about it. I was going to read this since it's a typical harem but now I feel kinda tricked lol. Let me give you a definition of harem. Harem- group of females sharing a single male. Remove the tag.

bigbear51:Thank you for the review. As well as for reading the story as far as you have. However, I have to be honest to you because I don't want to waste your time. I don't plan on this being a harem like other stories written on the site. It really is based on Japanese harem stories, which is closer to being about a single girl. I'm sorry, but I didn't want to give you false hope about what the future of the plot is going to be.
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