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2020-03-02 09:23

From what I can see in the synopsis. Your story basically seens like those one-shot manga that people tend to ignore after some chapters. Well, I can only say that you have quite the bomb in your hands. Just like a double-edged sword your novel has both the potential to be great and to suck... Being a writer is by no means easy. Although I admit that I'm no competent novelist, personally I feel plenty experienced regarding readers's likes and dislikes. This novel has a theme that escapes from the stereotypes of this app although not in a good way honestly. Your MC seens to be those wimpy useless guys the majority of readers despise, the "beta male" they say... Personally I'm not against shy or wimpy MCs since I identify myself in them and also because of Character Development. And about the heroines... Well, Reading the synopsis I already have a bad inpression of them honestly. A lot of readers here avoid stories like yours Just like the plague because of a lot of factors, and one of them is not wanting to experience new themes. Despite this review I'm a bit open-minded towards new ideias so I'm looking forward to your story, just as I said before, this is a double-edged sword. It will depend on you the author to make this crazy thing an enjoyable experience. I did not read any chapters before writing this Review also... I gave 5 stars to support the author ;) Keep up the good work

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Thank you for the kind words. I've noticed your other comment in the story, so I hope you are enjoying the read.

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