Story is more realistic approach to relationships as of chapter 12. Many of the girls have fallen for the main character's friend. However what ensues seems to the mc stealing waifu's off of the friends harem. Over all the world is nothing special with barely any time describing it( seems to be classic modern world) The characters have some personality but seem a bit forgettable at time. Writing quality is good, the update stability in this opening segment seems good. So far the plot has not had any super obvious plot holes, just wish it had some more cute moments.

From what I can see in the synopsis. Your story basically seens like those one-shot manga that people tend to ignore after some chapters. Well, I can only say that you have quite the bomb in your hands. Just like a double-edged sword your novel has both the potential to be great and to suck... Being a writer is by no means easy. Although I admit that I'm no competent novelist, personally I feel plenty experienced regarding readers's likes and dislikes. This novel has a theme that escapes from the stereotypes of this app although not in a good way honestly. Your MC seens to be those wimpy useless guys the majority of readers despise, the "beta male" they say... Personally I'm not against shy or wimpy MCs since I identify myself in them and also because of Character Development. And about the heroines... Well, Reading the synopsis I already have a bad inpression of them honestly. A lot of readers here avoid stories like yours Just like the plague because of a lot of factors, and one of them is not wanting to experience new themes. Despite this review I'm a bit open-minded towards new ideias so I'm looking forward to your story, just as I said before, this is a double-edged sword. It will depend on you the author to make this crazy thing an enjoyable experience. I did not read any chapters before writing this Review also... I gave 5 stars to support the author ;) Keep up the good work

I like the story so far, I like how the mc slowly building up relationship with other characters and I also liked the drama. Overall this is great! Keep up the good work author 👍

this book honestly seems like its for people w/ that digusting ntr fetish . lame af.. stupid 140 character bs 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

It's not a bad story but it seem more of your beta mc harems . When you see harem tag you would expect at least 2 ppl to be with the mc not 1. Japan has abused the crap out of the tag turning almost every mc into a beta mc, and not actually having a harem but a struggle through romance. Story is still ongoing so I could be wrong but up to 100 it's up come back to read after it gains more chapters if still on the same route up have to drop, for a simple reason it's not a harem ... good character development though.

This is an incredible story. It felt like I was reading the script of a rom/com anime. This became my favourite webnovel I read in this app till now. Thank u so much author for writing this beautiful and enjoyable story

I would really enjoy later chapters that include mc's kin as well as fleshing out and reaffirming some of the characters when they reappear such as that girl from Yogi's trip with the athlete, she gives bitchy vibes but she is so subtle that I feel like I'm imagining it. And furthermore I really want to see a scene with the big sister expressing her opinion on her little brothers sudden socialization

This. This is the greatest romance novel I have ever read. And though I dont read a lot if romance novels, I know for a fact once you start read you wont stop.

this is an amazing story. there are alot of interesting characters, and even though they are cliche they feel very developed. i got so invested into it.

its a good romcom, better than most, though its more on the romantic side than the comedic one. Character development is also good, the characters are pretty interesting, there's not to many many noticable plotholes either, it's also pretty realistic so that's a plus. I'm also quite surprised not many people read this hidden gem, though, that's kind of a blessing in disguise because the chapters won't be locked. It's good good read