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2021-05-17 12:48

Honestly I really liked this novel but the ending was just kind of... meh. The worldbuilding was great and had a lot of potential but the author didn't capitalize on that with the MC only studying all the time. Also there were many plotholes that were left unattended to like Betta's death, the aliens, the game world, etc. I would really like to get some closure on these topics but as with most novels, I probably won't get this. I thought that the dynamics of the characters were fun to read but the romance in the story was honestly not very great, especially with the harem at the end. I understand that the author had a hard time writing the novel at the end and that he was having problems writing the novel with his health problems. The first few chapters of the novel really got me hooked with how the spellcasting worked and all that. Also the system in this novel was well flushed out unlike other novels on this site and the skill naming was nice and descriptive without much superfluous talk. If I was asked if I would recommend this novel to other's, I would definitly say to give this a read because it is definitely one of the gems on this app/site. But I would also point out that one shouldn't expect to find a seemless ending. Thank you to the author for producing this great novel for us to read!

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

Well, the novel was basically dropped by the author, so instead of having plotholes the correct thing would be to say that the story was not really finished. To be more specific, it seems that it stopped halfway through.

Purplish
PurplishLv14

Actually I agree that the story seems to be incomplete as I think that the author just didn’t have enough material to work with nearing the end of his planned storyboard. The author also has a novel “noble’s emblem”, that follows the story of Betta after his death. Maybe this could explain some of the “plotholes”/incomplete stories in something like a sub-plot or side story. Also what ever happened to white amber, Roland’s pet?

Spelloyal:Well, the novel was basically dropped by the author, so instead of having plotholes the correct thing would be to say that the story was not really finished. To be more specific, it seems that it stopped halfway through.
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

Roland hired him in the game world, but in the end he just stayed with vivian. Outside the game world he probably died of old age. Following the concept of the game, it makes sense to abandon many quests when you are no longer interested in them, but I agree that there are really many abandoned subplots, but I didn't find any holes in the main plot (ignoring that the story ended in half).

Purplish:Actually I agree that the story seems to be incomplete as I think that the author just didn’t have enough material to work with nearing the end of his planned storyboard. The author also has a novel “noble’s emblem”, that follows the story of Betta after his death. Maybe this could explain some of the “plotholes”/incomplete stories in something like a sub-plot or side story. Also what ever happened to white amber, Roland’s pet?
WarChildG18
WarChildG18Lv4

Where can i find it?

Purplish:Actually I agree that the story seems to be incomplete as I think that the author just didn’t have enough material to work with nearing the end of his planned storyboard. The author also has a novel “noble’s emblem”, that follows the story of Betta after his death. Maybe this could explain some of the “plotholes”/incomplete stories in something like a sub-plot or side story. Also what ever happened to white amber, Roland’s pet?
Purplish
PurplishLv14

... I can only really find it on mtl... and thus I’m postponing my reading until I can find a better translation. If you find one tell me please.🔮

WarChildG18:Where can i find it?
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This is review for only 60 chapters during Trial Period of this novel. A very good novels for those who like Magic Elements. Don't get fooled by the "Video Game" genre of this novel. There is no system, STAT page, World Announcement or Ranking Leaderboard. The Game Interface is divided into Announcement(Level Up, Exp Gain, Quest, Update Notice, etc), Spell Models(spells that MC knows). It also contains a bit of Dark theme storyline as MC get to know that a Noble Family in the game world ate Human Heart(Orphan Children's) as they believed it will help then gain more lifespan. If you forget about the Real World, Game Cabins and Player Resurrection Skill then this novel is just like any other(good) cultivation novel(Magic except of Qi). MC is a OP mage because of his unique Talent "Magic Power Control". Any character in the game can choose 2 talents freely but MC already has this innate talent chosen for him so he was only able to choose 1 talent freely. Very little is known about the worlds both Game and Real. In these 60 chapters, Real World Storyline mostly revolves around MC updating his forum page, MC and his friends talking about the game in MC's friend's bar, MC in his office handing his Resignation Letter to the Manager. As for the Game World Storyline, it revolves around the town where MC spawned, the city he goes to, name of the country they are in and The Holy Realm where you have to go to make a guild. And lastly if you like this novel after reading and want to read MTL then you can search its chinese name on google. Its chinese name is:- 法爷永远是你大爷最新章节

Goldeagle131
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Wow. This is the literal best novel I’ve ever read, and dayum it is not what I was expecting it do be 😂 I was just lookin for some casual OP MC books with the occasional face-slap, and I stumbled upon this masterpiece! The plot has INCREDIBLE potential and the development is also very good, with hints at what is to come but nothing concrete. The class development so far is also very good, with seemingly (😏) balanced classes, whether they be balanced with more speed and less strength, or more everything and less “oH iF I sWING mY sWORD lIke tWICE iLL gET eNOUGH eXP tO lEVEL uP.” Overall, this novel is going VERY well so far, and the only excuse I can find that would be reasonable to not read it is that it’s only got 60 chapters right now. Also, just because of how relatable the MC and the other characters are, I’m going to point this out. The characters style of humor, their hobbies, and even their daily life is incredibly relatable. While this man is incredibly talented in-game, outside of it he’s just one of the bois, going to bars with friends, riding his back, playing some old nostalgic childhood games from time to time, and just not being a douchebag based on peoples’ backgrounds, etc.. It really gives this book a great comedic affect even making you laugh about things that weren’t even meant to be funny. Overall, this novel deserves five stars without a doubt, and if you’re debating reading it, read through at least the first two chapters, and you’ll know whether you like this or not.

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