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CoderemoveLv123yr
2021-04-18 12:54

This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.

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Delorra
DelorraLv11

wow, so glad I dropped this novel while it's still arguably decent.

Coderemove
CoderemoveLv12

I wish that someone gave the author a planner or a notepad. The number of plot lines that they discard is kinda disappointing. One of the main things that annoyed me was how the deal that Roland could cast spells in the real world was not some big reveal or a shock. He just uses magic hand and...nothing. Next time we just see him using magic as if it was normal.

Delorra:wow, so glad I dropped this novel while it's still arguably decent.
TobeDeleted
TobeDeletedLv14

Yeah, this sums it up well. So good at first, but suddenly turned into a misogynistic clown fiesta.

ChadFacts
ChadFactsLv2

Eh, it's the exact opposite.

TobeDeleted:Yeah, this sums it up well. So good at first, but suddenly turned into a misogynistic clown fiesta.
TobeDeleted
TobeDeletedLv14

Sooo... bad at first then turns into a misogynistic clown fiesta that you like?

ChadFacts:Eh, it's the exact opposite.
ChadFacts
ChadFactsLv2

I mean the opposite to the last claim. It's actually a very third wave feminist novel.

TobeDeleted:Sooo... bad at first then turns into a misogynistic clown fiesta that you like?
TobeDeleted
TobeDeletedLv14

Yeah, people constantly looking down on female gamers and drivers totally sounds like third wave feminism.

ChadFacts:I mean the opposite to the last claim. It's actually a very third wave feminist novel.
ChadFacts
ChadFactsLv2

So like two cases of minor characters saying things? You're completely ignoring how the author made an all-female guild stronger than every other guild, overly glorified them, and had the MC talk about how great women and feminism is.

TobeDeleted:Yeah, people constantly looking down on female gamers and drivers totally sounds like third wave feminism.
KING_LEWIS_II
KING_LEWIS_IILv15

and yet somehow the only time any woman is ever truly happy is when she has a strong man to rely on. every single woman in this story acts this way. the author claims they're strong, smart, and independent, but somehow they can't even tie their own shoes until a man steps in to help them.

ChadFacts:So like two cases of minor characters saying things? You're completely ignoring how the author made an all-female guild stronger than every other guild, overly glorified them, and had the MC talk about how great women and feminism is.
ChadFacts
ChadFactsLv2

quote where a female character couldn't tie their shoes without specifically a male's help

KING_LEWIS_II:and yet somehow the only time any woman is ever truly happy is when she has a strong man to rely on. every single woman in this story acts this way. the author claims they're strong, smart, and independent, but somehow they can't even tie their own shoes until a man steps in to help them.
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Devilcrawl
DevilcrawlLv10

This is review for only 60 chapters during Trial Period of this novel. A very good novels for those who like Magic Elements. Don't get fooled by the "Video Game" genre of this novel. There is no system, STAT page, World Announcement or Ranking Leaderboard. The Game Interface is divided into Announcement(Level Up, Exp Gain, Quest, Update Notice, etc), Spell Models(spells that MC knows). It also contains a bit of Dark theme storyline as MC get to know that a Noble Family in the game world ate Human Heart(Orphan Children's) as they believed it will help then gain more lifespan. If you forget about the Real World, Game Cabins and Player Resurrection Skill then this novel is just like any other(good) cultivation novel(Magic except of Qi). MC is a OP mage because of his unique Talent "Magic Power Control". Any character in the game can choose 2 talents freely but MC already has this innate talent chosen for him so he was only able to choose 1 talent freely. Very little is known about the worlds both Game and Real. In these 60 chapters, Real World Storyline mostly revolves around MC updating his forum page, MC and his friends talking about the game in MC's friend's bar, MC in his office handing his Resignation Letter to the Manager. As for the Game World Storyline, it revolves around the town where MC spawned, the city he goes to, name of the country they are in and The Holy Realm where you have to go to make a guild. And lastly if you like this novel after reading and want to read MTL then you can search its chinese name on google. Its chinese name is:- 法爷永远是你大爷最新章节

Goldeagle131
Goldeagle131Lv3

Wow. This is the literal best novel I’ve ever read, and dayum it is not what I was expecting it do be 😂 I was just lookin for some casual OP MC books with the occasional face-slap, and I stumbled upon this masterpiece! The plot has INCREDIBLE potential and the development is also very good, with hints at what is to come but nothing concrete. The class development so far is also very good, with seemingly (😏) balanced classes, whether they be balanced with more speed and less strength, or more everything and less “oH iF I sWING mY sWORD lIke tWICE iLL gET eNOUGH eXP tO lEVEL uP.” Overall, this novel is going VERY well so far, and the only excuse I can find that would be reasonable to not read it is that it’s only got 60 chapters right now. Also, just because of how relatable the MC and the other characters are, I’m going to point this out. The characters style of humor, their hobbies, and even their daily life is incredibly relatable. While this man is incredibly talented in-game, outside of it he’s just one of the bois, going to bars with friends, riding his back, playing some old nostalgic childhood games from time to time, and just not being a douchebag based on peoples’ backgrounds, etc.. It really gives this book a great comedic affect even making you laugh about things that weren’t even meant to be funny. Overall, this novel deserves five stars without a doubt, and if you’re debating reading it, read through at least the first two chapters, and you’ll know whether you like this or not.

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