Started out good had high hopes, but yeah kind of turned to shit. a problem many chinese suffer from the semi racist shit and talking about women and their character traits like its the middle ages over generalises how all women are all the time a problem a lot of chinese novel suffer from but it's exremely bad here. Kind of wonder if the author has even meet a women before. i get it he wants a to write a harem wich are usually shit but this is just extremely bad even for a harem.
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LIKEHow many times has "Penetrating her defenses" come up? The author is an actual and legitimate virgin with no understanding of female anatomy... Don't get too upset about his lack of experience on the subject. There are tons of legitimate grievances against this novel. There really are. And yes his understanding of women definitely rates highly among them. I'm just saying that he's pretty clearly an actual incel so we should try and be somewhat understanding that he's trying to write for characters he truly doesn't understand at all.
Not you using the "they is an incel, not their fault" defense. They are still sprouting a lot of s*xist talking points as if it were the 50s. Furthermore, if they truly had issues with writing women, they could involve some women beta readers from their discord or other sites. It's just pure laziness on the author's side.