not a bad read, just about the same as everything else out there nothing to be expected from this work! as expected of a fan-fic this usually can be considered a 2 maybe a 3 a best anything above that is being generous! however this author doesn't take criticism well & result to personal attacks & is very violent im not sure if he has the power to delete said comment but i wouldn't support this subpar novel w/ an uneducated & very rude author! however treating this as a casual read when your taking a ๐ฉ might be appropriate.
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LIKEWhat were you expecting dude? If you can't take the criticism then don't post your story on the Internet for all to see. Have you ever heard of the expression "if you can't take the heat, stay out of the kitchen"?
SwordGod007:I mean I don't wanna say this but try to write something of this level which is **** according to you and then talk back....
I mean the time you write is irrelevant you dont get good review just because you spent time on it. You dont get a free well done participation trophy. It's a review system, if you want to get good reviews then write a good story. Take criticism and improve the story, isn't that the whole point of making a fanfic? Because you can't earn money from it. If you dont use critisicm to improve your writing then whats the point of even writing on this site in the first place? Do you want a load of bots to stroke your ego or something?
SwordGod007:Well there are always ****ty people who this who just talk **** and says 'that was constructive criticism'. I mean rating a novel/fanfic badly, which an author have spent so much time to make, just because you can't do argument is very saddening....
Are you a idiot or what...just jumping down on conclusion without knowing anything at all.... I replied to these two aasholes as they just do nothing and ***** in the name of constructive criticism.... And mind your own fucking thing dude... There are many people who give constructive criticism and not just talk ****... So please write after knowing facts
Quidanstealsnovels:I mean the time you write is irrelevant you dont get good review just because you spent time on it. You dont get a free well done participation trophy. It's a review system, if you want to get good reviews then write a good story. Take criticism and improve the story, isn't that the whole point of making a fanfic? Because you can't earn money from it. If you dont use critisicm to improve your writing then whats the point of even writing on this site in the first place? Do you want a load of bots to stroke your ego or something?
I agree one hundred percent. Youโll tell the stuff and theyโll keep asking about it and theyโll just call it a plot because theyโre stupid and didnโt pay attention. Theyโll continue to ask questions about things you had already talked about in the story and why it happened but theyโll rate it bad because they didnโt understand when it was clearly there. Youโll tell stuff beforehand and 10 chapters later when it happens, theyโll rate it bad when you already told them that this was how it was going to go. If they canโt give you a solid reason for rating your stuff bad then delete that ****, it isnโt constructive criticism, it just them being stupid and not paying attention. The first thing you need to do is to look at their profile history, most people that rate good stuff bad have a track record for just giving one stars on anything they see in the novel they remotely donโt like. Theyโll never rate it good and is always looking for the bad, even through theyโve read it for so long. Theyโre looking for a mistake that they donโt like then theyโll rate it bad. Theyโll never look for anything good, they just love corruption. Be advise, delete these trolls reviews, theyโre nothing, once again, just look at their history on their profile and youโll know from that. Those trolls deserve no attention, of course, you could flame them then delete their ****. Take it from me, I look at all my reviewers history to see if theyโre trolls or not, and most are! Good luck and sorry for this long note. ๐๐๐
SwordGod007:Well there are always ****ty people who this who just talk **** and says 'that was constructive criticism'. I mean rating a novel/fanfic badly, which an author have spent so much time to make, just because you can't do argument is very saddening....