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Wow Naruto world with technique from kimetsu no yaiba.... This is insane... If written properly this is going to be massive hit.................

Expecting great things from this fan fiction your last one "martial arts in animeverse" Is also great, hope that you continue both of them

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I'll give you 5 star considering you've done an amazing good job on your mc in 'martial arts' fanfic as a swordsman. Here's hoping you can turn mc into mihawk like existence in naruto world. Unbeatable swordsman with no kekkei genkai. And perhaps body mutation from the breath-technique that makes his fire-style absolute beast.

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I tried, I really tried but there’s just too many plot hole, too many inconsistencies, too many illogical story development. The story idea itself is good really.. Read at your own risk.

It's a SI - OC fic of Naruto. The writing has little mistakes and the updates are frequent. You have a MC who is born right around the death of the fourth hokage. We are 'told' that he practiced to the point where he surpasses Itachi's strength at the same age. With that out of the way, lets bring up the things I dislike. His breathing technique can be consider the ultimate way to power up for the MC. And lets not forget that at 6yrs old the MC can destroy one of the swordmasters in the village with only the second rank in his sword technique. These two things are what tells me that the author is too caught up in his OP fantasy and fails to define the process/training the MC has to go through to becoming god tier. This causes massive plot holes that shouldn't be there like: when can you join Anbu, how can a Chuunin Taijutsu Specialist teach B Rank Jutsu, and is talking to the Hokage on equal terms at age 6 acceptable? On top of this the author frequently contradicts his statements in the same chapter. It makes it clear that the only research he has done was on the names of techniques/places but not the underlining functions of ninja society. Leaving things unaccounted for and creating this kind of crack fic. And plus the time skip destroyed what little it had going for it.

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