ChiefBoots

the translation quality is at the top from what I've seen from webnovel 5 stars story development is top gives the mc a plan and the mc sticks to it something that's rarely seen in fanfics 5 stars character design he's given us a good base for mc but there still some missing i.e. what does he look like before powers activated and after, in the police force, as a gambler and as a shield agent we also haven't don't know how big he is unless i missed it does he kryptonian powers or supermans genetics they may be similar but there are differences as supermans is genetically, physically above most if not all krytonians 4 stars, updating stability is great as it may not be every day but there is always more than one chapter every upload which i prefer than just one chapter a day, world background is great there was a major jump from him being in the police force to shield agent and all in between but i feel like we missed something as there could have been more like how does a superpowered being handle police in the USA as he doesnt have the worry and trauma all other police members face, how would he deal with discrimination as a chinese American and how do his fellow police members feel about him leaving upruptly to him now being a billionaire

she should be Selene Corvinus

isn't there a selene gallio the oldest mutant

yes

it should be aconite as lunaria is another plant

i know its a combined Tv universe but i feel like your time frame is wrong (14yrs to early)and its not to late change if you want but it should be Tim and nyla here maybe even lopez abd Tim should be him coming right of the army and having just married his wife, just a suggestion imma follow your vision

unlike some people i don't care that peter kills it him having the titan mecha, i feel that kingpin was the wrong opponent for the mecha to debut against

i would have no problem with them calling it soccer, if they didnt name the one sport that for the majority of its playtime is played with their hands football