this is a great story, there are only a few grammar problems, except for this and wonderful I highly recommend this novel plus an advice make a country where you command in the soap opera and I am also Brazilian
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LIKESorry I mean I will do that but do want any country in particular I decided to give ypu the chouce since you thpugh it up and I'll even have a shout out with you first and maybe one or two others I thought were good ideas or feed back.