watashiwavdesu

I state that so far only 10 chapters have been released, so this review is considered "to trust". I read a lot of fan fiction about danmachi, really many and every time there were two options to choose from. The tragic past, or one that is never explained in detail because it matters little to them. There is a third category however. I would call rarities among the rarities, where the past is simple, coincided and really serves to give more depth to the main character. This novel has one of these past. You have surely already been able to read something or if you have not read it, just read the first line. " I am cancer-stricken" essentially what it says. From here the past evolves and explains who are the protagonists that act in his previous life, and we can discover a bit of the personality of the protagonist from the first chapters, avoiding all the information of little account or meaningless.. Certainly little is taken into account about his mother, it was a bit put aside just because it wasn't important in the novel itself and could only serve to enrich the backstory more, but we know that by her character, she has always been close to the protagonist. I think the writing quality is excellent, the descriptions aren't boring and are put in order to stimulate the reader to continue reading, everything proceeds with a moderate speed, the plot is not fast but not slow, it evolves chapter after chapter in a stable way. The world has yet to be explored properly, I mean it’s only 10 chapters but from the expectation I would say that the author will manage without problems. Last but not least, the stability of updates. The author says he has never written before and that this is his first work, yet he manages to write two chapters a day, and they are very long, from the amount of pages no less than 2000 per chapter, someone even over 2500. I don’t know if it’s a natural talent or just that author is a liar, lol. The only thing that should be improved could be the use of even more specific words and more present comparisons to make readers better imagine the scenes that are taking place, but I would say that for a fan fiction on webnovel, the quality is more than good, I’d say it’s of the highest quality. This novel deserves the 2nd place in the ranking.

When I informed myself about the monster, my interest was immediately teased. You didn't make things harder for me, instead you made me think oh god this is what I truly needed. If anyone has reasonable suggestions, may it be you or anyone else, I'll be sure to point out I was inspired, with an alt title or simply am A/N. Thanks again for that!

sir I..It'll take so much more than just 2 months lmao, I am re-writing properly and I apologize for this misunderstanding caused by my bad writing🙃 I'm doing my best!

Indeed.

I mean, why not.

Nup, it's different. Vahn had the ability to name a monster, this is merely a function of the system, meaning the name can only further strengthen the monster's path, although it can drastically change the abilities, the result is pretty much the same. The real thing here is the connection linking the monster and his fate together, It's easier to understand when I will proper explain it in the novel though.

replying to me after 7 months..you took your sweet time for a reply.

thank you, I'm re-writing all the volume 1, so you can say I am the one who knows the first half of this novel wasn't good enough.

nup

thank you, I'll do my best to fix everything, all I need is some time.