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Kruzz
KruzzLv123yr
2021-04-07 20:59

Although the writing can be a little spotty with imperfect prose snd spelling, the story itself is good enough to excuse it. Especially the start can be rough as it takes an almost painfully realistic approach to character development. Some humans could quickly adapt, but not everyone. This is why most of humans die off in the end of the world setting see. Zhang Dong is in the latter categor, a truly good person unfit for war. Fortunately he spawned in strong enough to be able to somehow live through it. He has come far through the story and still has a long way to go. I'm cheering for him, although I secrerly want him to get a 3rd child who just happens to have a constitution suited for evil. He did get seperated from his wife right after smex time. Of course, that is just my fantasy. This is a wonderful tale of a kind man with an even kinder heart. I do emphasise with him a lot through the story and I genuenly wish happiness to him. If you came here for mundane face slapping and murderhobo events, you are out of luck. This is a very gentle tale set in a not so gentle world. Zhang Dong had set his goal to change the world for the better, for everyone. I know that demonic cultivation is attractive to most folk, but keep in mind that Zhang Dong is a holy cultivator to the bone. Thank you author for writing what is arguably one of my favourite novels. :)

Unfathomable Patriarch

kuropon8
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Beeruss
BeerussLv14

Overall a good novel, but the MC...probably pussy type which is okay???? So no HAREM which is fking good because that genre is pure cancer and the people that like it too most likely a fat dude, no life retard. That's all. Im giving it a 4 🌟 review. Probably change it in the near future IF THE MC IS NO LONGER A COWARD *HINT* *HINT* AUTHOR PLS GET RID OF MC COWARDNESS...thanks in advance.

5yr

Pripriri
PripririLv5

Unfathomable patriarch this title is fvking clickbait At first I tried reading this because of the domineering title but tf with this mc? What part of him is unfathomable. So an average idiot is unfathomable?

5yr
Feoinn
FeoinnLv2

Read it up to chapter 30 something because I didn't want to judge too quickly. I was wrong. The MC is a coward, awkward guy even if his cultivation is high, he mumbles, stutters and cannot even act normal. Dont get me started on his fighting skills. The dude is a pussy. End of, no character improvement. If otakus are presented like this in fiction I hope in reality they're not that worse in Asia. If they are, I feel sorry for their parents.

5yr
kuropon8
kuropon8Author

If anyone is confused by this novel and the one that has Senior instead of Patriarch in it, it's because I moved it from the fan-fic section as I placed there by mistake. I thought that was the place for original novels to go.

5yr
Serious_Reader
Serious_ReaderLv4

An idiotic story, idiot MC and no depth of character design its like an over simpathic japanese otaku got transmigrated in a chinese novel and then doing what **** they always do there is system tag but nothing of system in volume 2 in volume 1 MC just use system for acting cool no use of brain and a lot of moral bull****ing

4yr
Ellaz
EllazLv3

Story a bit slow to start off, MC a bit of a bumbling idiot at the beginning but there is some progress later. Not a story for those that expect a lot of killing happening.

5yr
CestMoi
CestMoiLv14

The story development is utterly slow. The character is too flawed and unrelatable. If you made him a bit smarter this could work out. Without his cheat I can see him dying from tripping on a branch. Yeah i know this comes with character development. But from what I see he lacks self preservation. Buying useless skills instead of something that could help him adapt to his situation and new found power. He doest even have a sense of urgency. When all he cares about is internet and hot springs thats clearly a bad sign. The only good part is your superb writing and fast update speed.

5yr
ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv5

Read up to chapter 43. Horrible novel!! MC is a shut-in coward otaku. Supposedly well read in cultivation novels but is an idiot when and even more a coward when knowing that he transmigrated into a powerful body with a system. Can not relate or comprehend the MC’s character or personality. It’s just tooooooo retarded and annoying. Waste of time

4yr
Kentchuppp
KentchupppLv11

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

this the best case of never judge a book by it's cover but here it's title the book is about a coward and stupid mc in a generic cultivation verse with generic plot and characters and generic cultivation world like a starts from a weak place then becomes strong next arc new sects or kingdoms introduced becomes weak again etc I can acpect a cowardly but cunning or clever mc cause they can still make it to top for readers looking for relaxation or something to pass time this is not for as this novel will only leave u frustrated and with rage and utter loathing towards the mc so read if u like such things thou I not

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