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KingofMortals
KingofMortalsLv125yr
2020-04-07 13:17

A new Apocalyptic- game-genre novel.. Thank god it's happening in another country... Unlike other CN... The background is based in semi realistic world... The style of narration is simple and easy to understand.. And makes you feel the simulation as if we are watching... The characters are excellently fleshed out.. With their own unique temperaments and backgrounds... Author incorporated both game and system fiction into the world building.. To create a fantastical fiction novel... With the same stable updates and writing quality.. I hope author continues writing this amazing book... And journey us through the end...

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ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

Did the novel/author become better ?, because that chapter 74~76 ruined the story there and lot of reader have dropped it, so can you give a clear picture instead of just mindlessly praise it ?, at least so reader will know what to expect and read it, instead of just reach there, drop it and give 1 star there, here is some comment example in that chapter (slight spoiler for non-reader), don't get me wrong, the setting in novel is intrigue me, but I hope the author actually improve and fix it later, and not just stuck there and not learn from the mistake at all, which will make future chapter more annoying and worse to read: +What do you mean by "setting an example" then the next scene makes him say "they're innocent"? Bruh, nice potential but it got ruined by the constant contradiction of personalities, especially this Evo dude, thought he was smart but all he's doing is trying to become a white knight in a zombie world. +And that evo ... i tought he was a cunning ruthless genius type and he went to the dont't do this don't do that ... a economy in a apocalyptic scenarios is based on strenght not love and kindness +What the **** happened with the badass mc ... he was starting on a good mob boss type and now two of his people are killed and he only goes for the leader ? +Don't get me wrong, i love this novel. But seeing your companions killed and some smartass guy said "No don't kill them they're just being used blabla". Yep, the mastermind is killed but lol I'm starting to dislike this Evo guy also + It’s so confusing. The story don’t really connect and chapter is very disjointed. I get that the author is giving back stories in other setting but at least wrap up what’s going in the moment. Last chapter was the incident with the major. What happened after that? Did they just do nothing after the raid? Were they happy with just the major’s death? Give us a conclusion to the events unfolding

Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14

so should I read or not? I'm so confused!

ArashiTenebris:Did the novel/author become better ?, because that chapter 74~76 ruined the story there and lot of reader have dropped it, so can you give a clear picture instead of just mindlessly praise it ?, at least so reader will know what to expect and read it, instead of just reach there, drop it and give 1 star there, here is some comment example in that chapter (slight spoiler for non-reader), don't get me wrong, the setting in novel is intrigue me, but I hope the author actually improve and fix it later, and not just stuck there and not learn from the mistake at all, which will make future chapter more annoying and worse to read: +What do you mean by "setting an example" then the next scene makes him say "they're innocent"? Bruh, nice potential but it got ruined by the constant contradiction of personalities, especially this Evo dude, thought he was smart but all he's doing is trying to become a white knight in a zombie world. +And that evo ... i tought he was a cunning ruthless genius type and he went to the dont't do this don't do that ... a economy in a apocalyptic scenarios is based on strenght not love and kindness +What the **** happened with the badass mc ... he was starting on a good mob boss type and now two of his people are killed and he only goes for the leader ? +Don't get me wrong, i love this novel. But seeing your companions killed and some smartass guy said "No don't kill them they're just being used blabla". Yep, the mastermind is killed but lol I'm starting to dislike this Evo guy also + It’s so confusing. The story don’t really connect and chapter is very disjointed. I get that the author is giving back stories in other setting but at least wrap up what’s going in the moment. Last chapter was the incident with the major. What happened after that? Did they just do nothing after the raid? Were they happy with just the major’s death? Give us a conclusion to the events unfolding
fegzzxc
fegzzxcLv13

reat it but don't expect too much from it it will only anger you and you will be more crtiticating the novel that reading it wich is a waste of time

Uncle_Roger_main:so should I read or not? I'm so confused!
Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

thanks nowi wont have to waste my time and if my time aint wasted i wont give a 1 star review ao u also did author a favor

ArashiTenebris:Did the novel/author become better ?, because that chapter 74~76 ruined the story there and lot of reader have dropped it, so can you give a clear picture instead of just mindlessly praise it ?, at least so reader will know what to expect and read it, instead of just reach there, drop it and give 1 star there, here is some comment example in that chapter (slight spoiler for non-reader), don't get me wrong, the setting in novel is intrigue me, but I hope the author actually improve and fix it later, and not just stuck there and not learn from the mistake at all, which will make future chapter more annoying and worse to read: +What do you mean by "setting an example" then the next scene makes him say "they're innocent"? Bruh, nice potential but it got ruined by the constant contradiction of personalities, especially this Evo dude, thought he was smart but all he's doing is trying to become a white knight in a zombie world. +And that evo ... i tought he was a cunning ruthless genius type and he went to the dont't do this don't do that ... a economy in a apocalyptic scenarios is based on strenght not love and kindness +What the **** happened with the badass mc ... he was starting on a good mob boss type and now two of his people are killed and he only goes for the leader ? +Don't get me wrong, i love this novel. But seeing your companions killed and some smartass guy said "No don't kill them they're just being used blabla". Yep, the mastermind is killed but lol I'm starting to dislike this Evo guy also + It’s so confusing. The story don’t really connect and chapter is very disjointed. I get that the author is giving back stories in other setting but at least wrap up what’s going in the moment. Last chapter was the incident with the major. What happened after that? Did they just do nothing after the raid? Were they happy with just the major’s death? Give us a conclusion to the events unfolding
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MarcGem
MarcGemLv13

Writing quality started off alright, then slowly came to sh!t. The grammar mistakes (lots of em) come at around chapter 40. At this point, the writing is not even a fraction as smooth as it had been when the story started. Can't say much about story development since I'm only up to chapter 58. All I can say is that it's quite boring at the later chapters, like you can predict what's going to happen. MC's merry band is equipped with thick plot armour and his only goal is to lead them to build a shop where they can sell goods.? I feel that author is downplaying the sense of danger in an apocalypse. It's like I'm reading a book about a party in a videogame farming for exp instead of an apocalypse story... There's plus sides though, in the earlier chapters, the entire part showcasing MC's history was done splendidly, but it all went downhill from there. The author only uses MC's background to explain his skillfulness at killing zombies and doesn't touch upon it again. Is he worried about his remaining family or does he not care and wants to forget them? And the other main characters (his best friends) are not emphasised upon. (at least not at chapter 60, maybe they will be later). They seem like the bland side characters instead of the mains because the author doesn't put much of an effort to describe their relationship with the MC. Side characters are side characters. Up to chapter 60, we only now their names and their previous occupation or general information (she is a middle-aged woman!). World background is actually pretty okay. Typical zombie apocalypse stuff yada yada. I like what the author did with the system, and explaining that those who couldn't take the pain at the start became zombies. He could build upon this and slowly reveal stuff about how it happened and why the system is in place. I stopped reading at chp. 65 because of the bad grammar. If it's fixed, I may start reading again. The novel started off strong and i hope it can salvage it's quality in future chapters.

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