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DrewWells
DrewWellsLv55yr
2019-12-21 19:42

A lot of potential, but with poor execution. There are too many times that the story contradicts itself. Moreover the MC is too OP and everybody follows him without ever questioning him from the first moment they meet him. Finally this story should really need some editing, there are so many errors that are even indicated by the readers, but the author didn’t bother to correct them....

I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!

Apocalypse_GOD
4.5
89 Chs

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

I agree aside from the OP part, he only has a respawn cheat which allows him to do I sane things. Later on the author tries to limit this by making him take along his sister in ever increasingly poor decisions that are just frustrating to the reader and make the character look like he has a mental deficiency. The concept of this story is great but it is curbed by that poor execution. The worst thing is that if someone were to copy the story, edit it to fix the issues pointed out and upload it as a fanfic of this, that it would be better than the original just by removing certain things and making slightly smarter decisions.... That would immediately kill the author's following as the author has not shown an indication of wanting to grow or taking feedback seriously. So far, the biggest issues are pacing, continuety and the character's decision making. If the story is building up to something, you can rest assured to know that whatever is slowly pushing you to the edge of your seat will be interrupted way before you get there, ensuring you will be bored or sufficiently irritated before it happens to no longer care at all...

5yr
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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Lol you're right. I also know a lot of authors that spin the criticism and make it look like the reviewers are at fault.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST:I agree aside from the OP part, he only has a respawn cheat which allows him to do I sane things. Later on the author tries to limit this by making him take along his sister in ever increasingly poor decisions that are just frustrating to the reader and make the character look like he has a mental deficiency. The concept of this story is great but it is curbed by that poor execution. The worst thing is that if someone were to copy the story, edit it to fix the issues pointed out and upload it as a fanfic of this, that it would be better than the original just by removing certain things and making slightly smarter decisions.... That would immediately kill the author's following as the author has not shown an indication of wanting to grow or taking feedback seriously. So far, the biggest issues are pacing, continuety and the character's decision making. If the story is building up to something, you can rest assured to know that whatever is slowly pushing you to the edge of your seat will be interrupted way before you get there, ensuring you will be bored or sufficiently irritated before it happens to no longer care at all...
5yr
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Eleanor_La_Pure
Eleanor_La_PureLv1

If you like second chance/time travel novels, or heroic DarkFantasy stories, give it a try: APOCALYPSE WAR: Survive. Die & Restart This is probably the future best novel on Webnovel.

4yr
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Apocalypse_GOD
Apocalypse_GODAuthor

Authors shameless review. All I can say is 5 stars all the way for this. If you like Zombie apocalypse get your ass over here. If you like a op power then get your ass over here. If you want a shameless author you better get your ass over here. All hail the patience sect.

5yr

Zedtsoy04
Zedtsoy04Lv14

Hey author! I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for stones or gems, I can tell you I don't have extra I am a cheap person... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you drop this novel go now, that will not be the end of it - I will not only look for you, I will not only pursue you... but if you do drop this, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you...kimosabe...

5yr
Rairaidani
RairaidaniLv14

Good so far. Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo. And of course it will strong and cunning mc. I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.

5yr
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it. The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him. To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating. The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end... Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things. Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all. For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.

5yr
Leon_Andrews
Leon_AndrewsLv12

Really enjoying this story. It's a very interesting take. Can't wait for more. Given the stuff already referenced in the story makes me think this is going to be an amazing ride. (Trying to praise without spoiling)

5yr
Susanne_Mathers
Susanne_MathersLv10

I have been loving this novel as of late and would wish for more to be posted however I can’t put that burden on the author and would like to say thank you for writing us this novel👍.

5yr
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Pommona
PommonaLv5

Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example). The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.

4yr
PloufPlouf
PloufPloufLv11

Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring

5yr
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